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Concept Description
- Website:
- n/a yet
- Objective:
- reflects brand well - easily adapted to media
- Target Market:
- wide demographic - but conscious/progressive individuals
- Categories:
- logo design, identity, clothing
see the details below, or feel free to ask any questions. . .
Logo Design - Be Positive t-shirt and accessory line geared towards progressive/consciously aware individuals. The profits will be reinvested into small businesses in developing nations through Kiva.com's small business loan program. We hope to eventually get 501(c)3 status at some point.
requirements
Must be 1 to 2 colors for screen-printing ease
Feel - Progressive, modern, new, aware, conscious
Demo - wide demographic, anyone that is spiritually aware, consciously aware, or just progressive.
Shirts will be organic and printed with water-based inks. Each shirt will be individually printed so there are minimal overhead costs, and also no waste with shirts in inventory.
We hope to pair up with a few organizations and key figureheads in the community to help promote the line and vision.
all comments welcome! please be as descriptive as possible - dont make me as "why", tell me please! ;-)
Previous Versions
Version 1
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Concept Reviews
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I really like design #1! The font is great and the logo is nice. The texture version looks good, but I don't think I notice the texture as much. It ends up making the design fuzzy looking and as if it were printed wrong.
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it has the style which is carryng ur subject
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If you don't like to use red color, maybe green then?
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Hi Shane,
I like 2 the best. I think the combination of the chosen typeface and the bar behind the B gives this design stability and reinforces the message "B Positive" as a statement. In comparison to number one that seems like a flowed in relaxed statement of "Be Positive" without the bar to the left of the B.
My color suggestions for a positive feel are the two colors green and orange: In Illustrator color box #: D7DF23 or (C20,M0,Y100,K0), FDB913 or (C0,M30,Y100,K0)
With the above orange as the background and the green for the cross and the word positive. It kind of brings a modern, clean, happy feel.
(Just a suggestion. Color is so hard to determine.)
I also like 4a and 5b.
3a kinda seems medical to me and I don't know why.
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I like #2 the best, very clean. As for the colors, I actually like it in B&W, it gives it more impact.
The only thing I might change is to make the square a tad smaller and rotate it a bit more. Otherwise, it looks great!
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I think this could be a lot more positive. I can't find positiveness here, I guess it lacks some graphic element or even colour variation. The lettering is fine, but can work it out as well
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3a and 5a
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Concept 1 works the best for sure. I like it quite a bit. My only question, is the square crooked or is that an optical illusion?
Great work, great logo!
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Shane Ernest commented:square is crooked, slightly. Put more accurately the perspective is different, tried out 3d within illustrator and liked the effect. thanks for the comments
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thanks sabrina! I was trying to be subtle with the texture as I only want that to reflect the "grassroots" nature of the company. . . it's not anything important, and I'd rather have the mark and vision be higher priorities.
any thoughts on colors? =) thanks again!