Shane Ernest

logo design for "Be Positive" t-shirt line

By Shane Ernest

   on Oct 23, 2009
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  • Patrick Couch

    Patrick Couch

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    Love the very first one!

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 3:45 PM

    It's a great start. I would explore more fonts.

    • Shane Ernest
      Shane Ernest commented:
      Posted: on Oct 23, 2009 at 6:00 PM

      thanks patrick!

      different typefaces for the mark itself, the name, or both the logo mark and the type?

      just to clarify! ;-)

      thanks again!

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    • Patrick Couch
      Patrick Couch commented:
      Posted: on Oct 30, 2009 at 11:48 AM

      Sorry for the delay, My thoughts were in the name. I love to logo.

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  • Omri Haim

    Omri Haim

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    liked the second one on the left side

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 4:40 PM

    real nice. looks very professional. don't touch it.

    • Shane Ernest
      Shane Ernest commented:
      Posted: on Oct 23, 2009 at 6:00 PM

      Thanks Omri - any other thoughts? what do you feel works?

      thanks !

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  • Romy Haik

    Romy Haik

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    Add more colour, make it a little bit more fun.

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 5:37 PM

    Great idea, really. I really liked the first one, with the UNbolded font. I would maybe make it a different colour like light blue to make it a little bit more fun, because black doesn't transmit any positivity :) Hope I helped, great job on the idea.

    • Shane Ernest
      Shane Ernest commented:
      Posted: on Oct 23, 2009 at 6:02 PM

      Thanks for the comments Romy! This is just the initial stage really, I was fleshing out some concepts that came to me in meditation =P color will be added after I get the mark worked out with the type ;-)

      any thoughts on the coloring? i was thinking blue hues, but im not sure - again, keeping the colors to a minimum.

      danke!

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    • Romy Haik
      Romy Haik commented:
      Posted: on Oct 23, 2009 at 7:24 PM

      As I thought, light blue colours. I dont think a gradient will be a good choice, and even fi you do choose a gradient, dont use anything radical. I sugesst using a light blue and make the + a nice red, to make it more noticeable from the rest of the logo, which is important, because you want to pass the idea that it is POSITIVE. Still dont know if using a red is a good idea, but you can do something to play with the noticeability of the +.

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    • Shane Ernest
      Shane Ernest commented:
      Posted: on Oct 23, 2009 at 7:52 PM

      ya im worried about red - it's pretty popular in the Non Profit Market, i.e. (Red) for Aids, Red for Red Cross, etc. etc.

      Ill play with some colors after the mark is finished!

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  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

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    Try some colour?

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 6:48 PM

    Not sure how much colour you can use, but maybe try and make the B and the + different colours?

    I alctually like the bottom 2 designs, but all are fairly nice for a t-shirt design.

    • Shane Ernest
      Shane Ernest commented:
      Posted: on Oct 23, 2009 at 6:54 PM

      thanks alan! trying to keep colors minimal as the purpose of this venture is to support other businesses abroad - so low overhead on production would be great =)

      The company will initially offer t-shirts and such, but will also produce other accessories/items - so Ill keep those bottom two in mind.

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