Feliphe Tomazetti

Pintando a história

By Feliphe Tomazetti

   on Oct 23, 2009
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Concept Reviews

  • Kevin Elliott

    Kevin Elliott

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Enlarge the sponsor box

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 8:21 PM

    Contrary to most situations, I think you need to enlargen the sponsorship box, so that there is more whitespace bordering around the sponsor logos. This will make them stand out a bit more, and not let them bleed into the design.

    Other than that, I happen to like it quite a bit!

  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    paint brush

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 2:32 PM

    This look very good! Maybe you should adjust the lighting of the paint brush on the right, it is not quite right now.

    • Feliphe Tomazetti
      Posted: on Oct 23, 2009 at 2:34 PM

      I think too

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Oct 23, 2009 at 2:39 PM

      Oh, btw that is not the kind of brush you use for painting pictures, I think you should use another kind of brush there. Use the same kind of brush you have under the picture. Or just remove that brush from your work.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Good design, needs more info

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 3:05 PM

    How do I get there, what time is it, what are the details of the event? Design looks at but you really need info on the details as well.

  • Romy Haik

    Romy Haik

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    a little bit too messy..

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 6:05 PM

    It looks good overall, but a little bit too old. The white part of the sponsores (Or I dont know what it is) seems like you had no place to put it at, so you just stuck it there. Great job overall.

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes

    which is very highlighted as if light falls only on the brush

  • Luis LourençO

    Luis LourençO

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    More weight on title

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 7:12 AM

    Great concept! As a whole concept seems greatly tied, leading the user to an idea. Using a great background, a great pictorial reference (painting with canvas), and some "aged" elements you reference history and painting! Good job!

    Aproveito para lhe dar os parabéns. O conceito é óptimo, e acho apenas que deveria dar mais destaque ao título, aumentando-o ou dar-lhe um toque mais bolder. Não poderia passar sem deixar umas palavras na nossa lingua!

    • Ben Eradhun
      Ben Eradhun commented:
      Posted: on Oct 24, 2009 at 10:01 AM

      Cool and grungy...I think you should add a more realistic shadow behind he frame

  • Ben Eradhun

    Ben Eradhun

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    a bit more bright and sharpened

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 10:04 AM

    Cool and grungy...I think you should add a more realistic shadow behind he frame. You need to sharpen and brighten a bt more some lements like the frame and brush...overall good work

  • Ederson Morche

    Ederson Morche

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    Improve the brush on the table

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 10:29 AM

    Excellent work. I had not seen yet, but it was pretty cool. I agree with some reviews above, the brush on the table is a light with a little artificial. I disagree with Kevin that suggests raising the box of the sponsors. I even decrease a little, they are highlighted with a very large. Great work. Congratulations!

  • Jim Simpson

    Jim Simpson

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Great work. Clear and engaging.

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 9:07 AM

    This is a great looking poster. The purpose is clear and the design is balanced and unobtrusive.

  • Carlos Carvalhar

    Carlos Carvalhar

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    better second font

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 11:03 AM

    hi,

    i think you should use a more calligraphic font for genral info. The display font for header and for text are very different.

    also, i think you should use a frame for placing the logos.

    bye

  • Sorin Stefan

    Sorin Stefan

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    readbility

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 12:22 PM

    I would improve the readability a bit

  • Gustavo Leite

    Gustavo Leite

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Muito bom

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 12:40 PM

    Muito bom mesmo. Eu trabalharia melhro nos textos, não gosto de preto, talvez uma corzinha neles ficaria legal. A cor do quadro ta destoando um pouco das cores do material, talvez se desse um pouco mais de contraste e um pouco mais de vermelho/amarelo e ficará muito bom. Parabéns.

  • Kate Dawson

    Kate Dawson

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    font for dates...

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 2:54 PM

    ...should be more "historical" and by that I mean not so modern. A serif font might work, as long as it is not too busy. Maybe one that has rigid / wedge serifs, like Palatino? If you want to stick with a sans-serif, maybe try one that is not so modern. Also, I don't care for the font that the dates are in. It seems too much like an afterthought and seems unsophisiticated.

    The title's font choice at the very top is really nice.

    Also, the paintbrush on the corner of the painting is not right. Lighting and brightness needs to be adjusted. Also, it would be better if it was a paint brush that is more suited to oil painting.

    Good work! Overall feel is nice.

  • Rasheed Sulaiman

    Rasheed Sulaiman

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Font used. Add more colors.

    Posted on Oct 29, 2009 at 12:09 PM

    Very easy to read and a overall good concept.

  • Janessa Mc Kell

    Janessa Mc Kell

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes

    the lighting on the brush to the far right is off a bit..it doesn't fit in the color scheme.

    I would remove the white box and instead use a soft glow behind the sponsor logos because the white is a bit harsh.

    This is all the textual information that is needed..no phone numbers, address, email..info about the painting drive?