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need more red color
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I like the design overall. The color scheme I think needs changing. I also smirked at the "Gift of Healing" at first because I thought they were bobble heads. Obviously I don't think that's the reaction you want.
Other than that, I think this design works for your purposes.
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Joel Glovier commented:Haha, yeah the heads were a quick addition for concept. Still deciding on which photos to use. So of course they'll be blended better.
How would you change the colors?
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Not much to change, looks very christmas. Maybe add some shine and reflection to the christmas ball.
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I like the design, and really like the red text works well.
Im just not sure about the heads no it, not sure why though.
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All jokes aside, they do look a bit too happy. I need to pay to heal a child who is already healthy and happy? Perhaps it's just a psychological issue!
This is a christmas campaign, but I don't see anyting but snowflakes to make that connection. Is there a way to reference christmas trees, or other religious holiday references (not just for christianity, but all religions).
The third child is a bit too dark (in terms of reflection, not skin color). Any way to lighten that?
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Joel Glovier commented:
Thanks for the input Kevin. The child images are still quite a work in progress. These are just early images, still discussing with the creative team what images to use. The overall theme is supposed to convey a strong message of hope and healing, so we'll probably stick with the happy kids instead of the gut wrenching images we have.
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the ribbon like effect is very much touchng but didnt like the cutout like stuff (images for kids and earth) that looks odd..rest is nice...
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It looks overall very messy, Too much playing with the green color, very dominant here. I would use a bit more grey. The structure is ok, I would spice up the right side of the website too.
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Joel Glovier commented:
I suppose you're referring to the rest of the page...well all that is the CMS that I just have to work with. Pre-developed before my hire and can't change now. But that part is too come...just not for a few months!
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LOVE the 3d on the fonts. Beautiful design. I would change how the faces are orientated on the graphic.
strange childs