I like the first one more. And what I would change, is that I would use the "hot" orange also on the "Products & Prices" -button. And separate the "Healthcare - Retail - Warehouse" area more from the rest of the content. Maybe by putting a stronger or different color of stroke around it? The headline in the image could be white as in layout 2.
I would recommend pretty much that he said.
Especially the text in the banner in the first one, its the only downside to the whole desing in my eyes.
Thanks guys, i'll twaek it and waiting for other commnets before having a final idea and direction.
and one thing I don't like here is in the footer from follow us. don't use background or remove drop shadow as it is drawing more attention than the 3 boxes on top of this.
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I preferred the first image. is excellent, except for the logo that I do not like.
I found it strange space between the logo and the menu is very large. The space between the menu items is also very large.
The buttons "HEALTHCARE", "RETAIL" and "WAREHOUSE" are a strange typography. Not match the rest of the site. The "Products and Size" also runs a little the rest of the layout.
Anyway, it's a great job. Congratulations.
Go with the first design for sure. Really nice design here. A few things I might do to improve this design. I think I might like a different shade of green in the header and less copy. I also don't think the logo matches the caliper of the website. All that aside, you have a really great design on your hands here, GREAT Job!
I like the first one.
I see a lot of fonts though. I know its elementary but the focus is lost... in that I don't know what the focus is.
I like it.
The page structure is perfect, all acces to important categories is natural, the navigation is well thought.
Bravo
2nd version is best. Absolutely perfect, looks very serious and professional. Great job on that!
2nd version is best. Absolutely perfect, looks very serious and professional. Great job on that!
Really great design! Love the greens in the whole site.
I really love the bottom section of both of the designs. For the first one, maybe space out the text a bit (looks too busy for me).
Thanks all for the good feedback. I'll tweak and revise the designs accordingly.
and rest of second one...!!
Beautiful. From usability and interface standpoint it is very clean, very engaging. The layout is wonderful. Not much I would change at all.
Seems lost on the page. Really like the call-to-action callouts.
they look kinda muddy green boost them up so they can fit wut's beneath it
For the first concept, I like the header. It is nicely done, the only thing I would change is the 'information in realtime etc,' heading because it does not stand out from the background. Titles are usually there to attract attention. The typography you used in the second concept is a lot better. I also think that the 'start here' box's reflection could be change so it is done in the same style as the laptop's reflection.
The 'products & prices' button should probably be moved so that it is under the paragraph and text. Where it is right now is quite awkward, as it is not aligned to the grid and appears to have no relationship to anything else on the page.
Other than that, it is a very nice website, the bright colours makes it lively and enticing.
get rid of the "lens flare" behind the main text at the top. Makes the text look blurry.
At a quick glance, I'm not able to tell what you do. Need to make your offering much clearer.
This is because the text and images are not yet finalized, mainly the main tagline in the banner. All images are placeholders.
Looks great. Good green design with colors directing the eye. Any way you can cut down the mount of text in some of the paragraphs?
I dont get the main message. Nothing tells me about being mobile. I expected a mobile phone to be honest nit a laptop like.
it's mainly Mobilize healthcare applications, and managed Electronic Medical Record implementations. Enterprise Mobility and SAP Supply Chain Management solutions.
Nice work! Overall very nice.
I prefer some elements of 1: computer and depth of that bg logo (like other reviewer)
But like the changes you made to 2: it doesn't "shout" as much as 1 (which is good) webinar depth of green and colors
Other changes I'd suggest: make bg at bottom of page match top a touch more zip to "healthcare..." tabs
Nice.
Home page looks good.
there are some improvements in the subpage that can be made..
the start here and register here font can be changed
the above modules will look good if put inside a container with borders.