Ben Eradhun

Website Prototypes

By Ben Eradhun

   on Oct 23, 2009
21 Reviews11 Votes1 Favorite672 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Miro

    Miro

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    looks very good

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 9:34 AM

    I like the first one more. And what I would change, is that I would use the "hot" orange also on the "Products & Prices" -button. And separate the "Healthcare - Retail - Warehouse" area more from the rest of the content. Maybe by putting a stronger or different color of stroke around it? The headline in the image could be white as in layout 2.

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

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    Im with Miro

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 9:39 AM

    I would recommend pretty much that he said.

    Especially the text in the banner in the first one, its the only downside to the whole desing in my eyes.

    • Ben Eradhun
      Ben Eradhun commented:
      Posted: on Oct 23, 2009 at 10:02 AM

      Thanks guys, i'll twaek it and waiting for other commnets before having a final idea and direction.

  • Kiran Kumar

    Kiran Kumar

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    mee too with miro

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 10:22 AM

    and one thing I don't like here is in the footer from follow us. don't use background or remove drop shadow as it is drawing more attention than the 3 boxes on top of this.

    ch33r5

  • Ederson Morche

    Ederson Morche

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    I preferred the first image. is excellent, except for the logo that I do not like.

    I found it strange space between the logo and the menu is very large. The space between the menu items is also very large.

    The buttons "HEALTHCARE", "RETAIL" and "WAREHOUSE" are a strange typography. Not match the rest of the site. The "Products and Size" also runs a little the rest of the layout.

    Anyway, it's a great job. Congratulations.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Beautiful design

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 10:59 AM

    Go with the first design for sure. Really nice design here. A few things I might do to improve this design. I think I might like a different shade of green in the header and less copy. I also don't think the logo matches the caliper of the website. All that aside, you have a really great design on your hands here, GREAT Job!

  • Patrick Couch

    Patrick Couch

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    #1

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 3:56 PM

    I like the first one.

    I see a lot of fonts though. I know its elementary but the focus is lost... in that I don't know what the focus is.

  • Mike Goignan

    Mike Goignan

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    Nope

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 4:12 PM

    I like it.

    The page structure is perfect, all acces to important categories is natural, the navigation is well thought.

    Bravo

    • Romy Haik
      Romy Haik commented:
      Posted: on Oct 23, 2009 at 5:20 PM

      2nd version is best. Absolutely perfect, looks very serious and professional. Great job on that!

  • Romy Haik

    Romy Haik

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    Nothing :)

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 6:32 PM

    2nd version is best. Absolutely perfect, looks very serious and professional. Great job on that!

  • Sabrina Heath

    Sabrina Heath

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    great design

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 9:53 PM

    Really great design! Love the greens in the whole site.

  • Yaakov Kotliar

    Yaakov Kotliar

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    I like both, looks very good.

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 1:11 AM

    I really love the bottom section of both of the designs. For the first one, maybe space out the text a bit (looks too busy for me).

    • Ben Eradhun
      Ben Eradhun commented:
      Posted: on Oct 24, 2009 at 1:46 AM

      Thanks all for the good feedback. I'll tweak and revise the designs accordingly.

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

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    love the logo of the first one!!

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 8:57 AM

    and rest of second one...!!

  • Joel Glovier

    Joel Glovier

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    Ooolahlah!!

    Posted on Oct 24, 2009 at 9:36 PM

    Beautiful. From usability and interface standpoint it is very clean, very engaging. The layout is wonderful. Not much I would change at all.

  • Carissa Newton

    Carissa Newton

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    Callouts for Social Media Following

    Posted on Oct 25, 2009 at 10:18 PM

    Seems lost on the page. Really like the call-to-action callouts.

  • Amr Mohsen

    Amr Mohsen

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    nav buttons

    Posted on Oct 26, 2009 at 9:31 PM

    they look kinda muddy green boost them up so they can fit wut's beneath it

  • Ethlen Rain

    Ethlen Rain

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    For the first concept, I like the header. It is nicely done, the only thing I would change is the 'information in realtime etc,' heading because it does not stand out from the background. Titles are usually there to attract attention. The typography you used in the second concept is a lot better. I also think that the 'start here' box's reflection could be change so it is done in the same style as the laptop's reflection.

    The 'products & prices' button should probably be moved so that it is under the paragraph and text. Where it is right now is quite awkward, as it is not aligned to the grid and appears to have no relationship to anything else on the page.

    Other than that, it is a very nice website, the bright colours makes it lively and enticing.

  • Michael Donovan

    Michael Donovan

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    lens flare

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 8:52 AM

    get rid of the "lens flare" behind the main text at the top. Makes the text look blurry.

  • Jim Simpson

    Jim Simpson

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    • Design: 3
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    Clearer offering

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 9:03 AM

    At a quick glance, I'm not able to tell what you do. Need to make your offering much clearer.

    • Ben Eradhun
      Ben Eradhun commented:
      Posted: on Oct 27, 2009 at 9:51 AM

      This is because the text and images are not yet finalized, mainly the main tagline in the banner. All images are placeholders.

  • Ted Goas

    Ted Goas

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    A lot of paragraph text

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 10:28 AM

    Looks great. Good green design with colors directing the eye. Any way you can cut down the mount of text in some of the paragraphs?

  • Sorin Stefan

    Sorin Stefan

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    0 Votes
    the main messgae

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 12:16 PM

    I dont get the main message. Nothing tells me about being mobile. I expected a mobile phone to be honest nit a laptop like.

    • Ben Eradhun
      Ben Eradhun commented:
      Posted: on Oct 27, 2009 at 12:37 PM

      it's mainly Mobilize healthcare applications, and managed Electronic Medical Record implementations. Enterprise Mobility and SAP Supply Chain Management solutions.

  • Mark Demel

    Mark Demel

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    just some tweaks.

    Posted on Oct 27, 2009 at 1:25 PM

    Nice work! Overall very nice.

    I prefer some elements of 1: computer and depth of that bg logo (like other reviewer)

    But like the changes you made to 2: it doesn't "shout" as much as 1 (which is good) webinar depth of green and colors

    Other changes I'd suggest: make bg at bottom of page match top a touch more zip to "healthcare..." tabs

    Nice.

  • Karthick Rj

    Karthick Rj

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    0 Votes
    fonts in subpage

    Posted on Nov 02, 2009 at 8:38 AM

    Home page looks good.

    there are some improvements in the subpage that can be made..

    the start here and register here font can be changed

    the above modules will look good if put inside a container with borders.