Espree Devora

Search Extreme Sports Events Calendar Website NEW Mock Up

By Espree Devora

   on Oct 21, 2009
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  • Jorrie Neverland

    Jorrie Neverland

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    • Design: 2
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    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    2 Votes
    Bigger video more combined colors

    Posted on Oct 22, 2009 at 7:02 AM

    I would make the video section bigger and more combined colors, the purple and yellow dont come back no where. nice image of the surfer and liked the typography

    • Espree Devora
      Espree Devora commented:
      Posted: on Oct 22, 2009 at 10:07 AM

      Thanks! I agree the yellow and purple are not the best. I'll see about making the video bigger.

  • Zeev Wolkovitz

    Zeev Wolkovitz

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
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    2 Votes
    I like the logo on the image

    Posted on Oct 22, 2009 at 3:50 AM

    The image with the logo alone is enough, all text on the right is too big. "The most comprehensive calendar of quality action sports events." will be much better on the bottom of the image, in one line.

  • Etienne Maujean

    Etienne Maujean

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 3
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    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Fix the top of the layout.

    Posted on Oct 22, 2009 at 1:32 AM

    First things first, I wondered for a few moments what this site is about. I thought about a sportswear brand, or a surf event and then I saw the "What is ZexSports" area. Maybe you should add a baseline next to the logo or fix the "we are obsessed..." thing by a clear baseline like "We're a youth culture marketing agency". On the second hand, I think there a big issue with the video and call to action buttons area. Those two are not sot staring and for the record... what's the difference between trying it for free and signing it up ?

    • Espree Devora
      Espree Devora commented:
      Posted: on Oct 22, 2009 at 10:09 AM

      Great feedback. I'll work on visually communicating the basic message better. Thanks!

  • Jorne Wevers

    Jorne Wevers

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    1 Vote
    loginfield

    Posted on Oct 22, 2009 at 8:41 AM

    I dont agree with the comment that the text in the header must be gone. I think its one of the strong points of it!

    Overall design is good. Nice style and background is perfect and looks original for me. I never seen is so perfect.

    The only thing i dislike is the loginpart. It does'nt fit for me. the "login" text maybecan be be some same font as the logo? and the loginfield looks cheesy for me becaurse of its dark colors. Maybe some light grey?

    Good work!!

    • Espree Devora
      Espree Devora commented:
      Posted: on Oct 22, 2009 at 10:06 AM

      Thanks! Yea I definitely think the background is too dark now as well.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    1 Vote
    Go back to the previous design

    Posted on Oct 22, 2009 at 8:50 AM

    I think you started to go in the wrong direction here. Your previous design was much better. I don't like the header setup here.

    However the columns are much MUCH M-U-C-H better. I would also add some sort of divider line between the header image and the content area.

    So I guess my main beef is with the header area. I love the idea of just having your tagline on the image by itself since the typography is amazing and can stand on its own.

    • Espree Devora
      Espree Devora commented:
      Posted: on Oct 22, 2009 at 10:04 AM

      Thanks for your feedback! Do you mean have the "Guts" graphic or the actual tag line on its own? Yes, I do like the Guts graphic straight across as well. Separating out the content area is a good idea.

    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Oct 22, 2009 at 11:10 AM

      Basically I think you should drop the video clip, try it for free and sign up today and then just make the rest stretch across the image, make sense?

    • Espree Devora
      Espree Devora commented:
      Posted: on Oct 25, 2009 at 4:21 AM

      Simplify it. Yea I get it. Cool! thanks for this feedback. i think you're right.

  • Miro

    Miro

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    1 Vote
    a couple of things

    Posted on Oct 22, 2009 at 10:10 AM

    Put the GUTS+GRIT+GLORY in one line like you had before, it doesn't work now. Move the video-box where GRIT+GLORY is now, put a picture on the video box instead of the black. Put red background under headlines "What is..., Event photos and Search calendar" like you have in the "GLORY", you might use the same type style too. And change the yellow and purple gradients (maybe to f6d809 and 3777bc).

    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Oct 22, 2009 at 1:33 PM

      Oh, and the design still looks good :-)

  • shemalejasmin tina

    shemalejasmin tina

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    avarage

    Posted on Oct 22, 2009 at 5:36 AM

    common design

    • Espree Devora
      Espree Devora commented:
      Posted: on Oct 22, 2009 at 6:31 AM

      I appreciate you making a comment but could you offer more feedback so that I can make editing notes. Thanks.