Swarat Ghosh

website mock for cracked media

By Swarat Ghosh

   on Oct 21, 2009
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  • Julian Hernandez

    Julian Hernandez

    Rank: 4 Master

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    Too bloggy

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 1:52 PM

    To my taste, it looks too much like a blog and not like a web design website.

  • Cathrine Understrup

    Cathrine Understrup

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    Too many distracting elements

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 3:03 PM

    There is a lot of different elements, and in one way it gives the "bloggy effect" which is cool and make it more familiar, but on the other hand, it becomes quite messy, there is too many things cathing the eye. But I like the concept, less detailed.

  • Mike Goignan

    Mike Goignan

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 3
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    1 Vote
    items

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 4:45 PM

    Hi

    Like Cathrine said, too many things aroud the main content, you cant focus on infos. It's a company website, it's a problem if you don't push up the message correctly and give too much place to this that are not... I'll remove the DSLR camera and the laptop.

    Bye

  • Omri Haim

    Omri Haim

    Rank: 5 Advanced

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    • Design: 4
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    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    the proportions.

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 7:13 PM

    OK, nice web but it doesnt looks like a designer's web but a blog or something. work on proportions of the paper.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 2
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    Your getting better with each revision

    Posted on Oct 22, 2009 at 8:20 AM

    The content is really starting to stand out now. I like the changes you made here with the background stains and textures...

    Here is a great example of where I think you are trying to go.

    http://workawesome.com/career/school-did-not-prepare-you-for-work/

  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    Go Back in time to version 2's type application.

    Posted on Oct 22, 2009 at 10:54 AM

    Hi Swarat,

    I think the proportions have came a long way and look a lot better from previous versions.

    I think that you should keep the contents of type and Headings as you had it on version 2. I don't think the coffee stain idea works so great here because, it is just one more thing that feels out of proportion.

    I would just kick up the size of the magazines, C.D.s and go back to version 2's type content and see what that looks like in comparison.

    I think it is the C.D.'s in comparison to the camera, the camera to the magazines, that throw this off a bit.

    The pencil, eraser, clips, picture and paper weight look fitting to each other. As well as, the C.D.'s to the computer itself.

  • Cain Johnson

    Cain Johnson

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 3
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    • Engagement: 3
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    I'd add the media

    Posted on Oct 22, 2009 at 12:55 PM

    If I hadn't read the name I would have thought this was a travel agency. I like the look/feel, but i think it needs to be developed further. I'd move the welcome message down and put a large image of my best piece in that area. That's prime real estate your giving to some simple text.

  • Feliphe Tomazetti

    Feliphe Tomazetti

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 5
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    Too many distracting elements (2)

    Posted on Oct 23, 2009 at 7:36 AM

    Like Cathrine said, too many things aroud the main content, you cant focus on infos.

  • Carole Felmy

    Carole Felmy

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    the wood background

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 9:42 PM

    It feels quite crowded to me, and the dark wood background adds to the 'stuffiness'... But I like the idea of the surrounding elements, just maybe less of them, and scaled proportionally to each other (the mags and camera are tiny compared to the top cracked media etiquette for example)