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To my taste, it looks too much like a blog and not like a web design website.
There is a lot of different elements, and in one way it gives the "bloggy effect" which is cool and make it more familiar, but on the other hand, it becomes quite messy, there is too many things cathing the eye. But I like the concept, less detailed.
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Like Cathrine said, too many things aroud the main content, you cant focus on infos. It's a company website, it's a problem if you don't push up the message correctly and give too much place to this that are not... I'll remove the DSLR camera and the laptop.
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OK, nice web but it doesnt looks like a designer's web but a blog or something. work on proportions of the paper.
The content is really starting to stand out now. I like the changes you made here with the background stains and textures...
Here is a great example of where I think you are trying to go.
http://workawesome.com/career/school-did-not-prepare-you-for-work/
Hi Swarat,
I think the proportions have came a long way and look a lot better from previous versions.
I think that you should keep the contents of type and Headings as you had it on version 2. I don't think the coffee stain idea works so great here because, it is just one more thing that feels out of proportion.
I would just kick up the size of the magazines, C.D.s and go back to version 2's type content and see what that looks like in comparison.
I think it is the C.D.'s in comparison to the camera, the camera to the magazines, that throw this off a bit.
The pencil, eraser, clips, picture and paper weight look fitting to each other. As well as, the C.D.'s to the computer itself.
If I hadn't read the name I would have thought this was a travel agency. I like the look/feel, but i think it needs to be developed further. I'd move the welcome message down and put a large image of my best piece in that area. That's prime real estate your giving to some simple text.
Like Cathrine said, too many things aroud the main content, you cant focus on infos.
It feels quite crowded to me, and the dark wood background adds to the 'stuffiness'... But I like the idea of the surrounding elements, just maybe less of them, and scaled proportionally to each other (the mags and camera are tiny compared to the top cracked media etiquette for example)