Kevin Leclair

Seadoo Revamp

By Kevin Leclair

   on Oct 21, 2009
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  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

    Rank: 3 Superior

    2952

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    2 Votes
    Much, much better

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 9:05 AM

    Its amazing what that white box in the content area has done for your design.

    I liked the original, but this one works far better.

    My only change would be to the navbar, not sure what i would do, but it needs to stand out a little more.

    Good job.

    • Espree Devora
      Espree Devora commented:
      Posted: on Oct 21, 2009 at 11:05 PM

      Agree that the content area is MUCH better looking but want to make sure it is attracting the right action from your viewers.

  • Miro

    Miro

    Rank: 2 Titan

    3658

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    colors

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 9:14 AM

    Getting better, yes. Did you try to use more colors, yellow of the boat etc?

  • Swarat Ghosh

    Swarat Ghosh

    Rank: 2 Titan

    4866

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    looking nice from prev

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 12:50 PM

    looking nice from prev

  • Julian Hernandez

    Julian Hernandez

    Rank: 4 Master

    62

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    I think it's pretty good

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 1:59 PM

    I like the overall design.

  • Espree Devora

    Espree Devora

    Rank: 2 Titan

    391

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
    0 Votes
    FULL comment on last version

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 11:04 PM

    Just posted on the last version by accident. i'm pretty tired. Sorry about that.

    Let me know what you do so i can give you proper feedback. Can't tell from your current site.

  • Nikola Kumburovic

    Nikola Kumburovic

    Rank: 7 Student

    38

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    too much blue, if this is possible.

    Posted on Oct 28, 2009 at 2:19 PM

    I would like to see some orange or similar color in the upper. Maybe, "Register today, it's FREE!" button should make a great contrast if it is in orange or green color.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

    9919

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Looking so much better

    Posted on Oct 21, 2009 at 9:12 AM

    Making the content area white was a HUGE improvement. I like the slant on the picture, maybe you could overlap the picture and the content area a bit. Navigation looks great and I love the gradients in the background...very well done!