Concept Reviews
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- the grey bar at the top takes away from the beauty of the navigation bar
- I love the the first example of the nav
- like the color choices
- The curved corners need to have anti-aliasing. That's why they look jagged.
- I would take out the bold footer bar. Overall I like this site!
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On the home page, you have alot of empty space on the right, maybe bring that green bar up to just under the logo?
The content pages are fine, although again the right side of the logo is a little bare, maybe try adding in contact tel or email details?
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Ooxo Web commented:Thanks, You are absolutly right, I couldn't nailed it but now it's obvious, too much empty space, that's sure
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Looks very good and has the right feeling. Some things I would think of: 1) I'd show the packages on the products -page. Now the packages are nowhere to be seen (?). 2) Elements in the third image are a bit thrown around, maybe some more designing there...
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Ooxo Web commented:
Thank I should go back to my marketing 101 ;) For the 3rd page that's right it need some tweaking
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I think you could benefit from some tweaks in your content areas. I think if you made them more organized and planned out, the design would look a log better. I would lose the bottom black bar and move the logo above the top bar.
This is a great start and I really like the organic feel you have going here. Keep tweaking this!
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Ooxo Web commented:
Thanks I'll go back to my tools and tweak it for sure ;). Again thanks for your feeling
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i feel its a god try but to much emptyness need to incorporate some image or graphics depicting your subject more...
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Ooxo Web commented:
Thanks, I guess a little something to use the empty space won't hurt ;)
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In my opinion too many sentences one after another. Should be presented in a more engaging fashion. Otherwise, I like the overall look.
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Ooxo Web commented:
Thanks, That's right, rookie error, too much to tell in too little space
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the first page- nice job/ try some new colors and combains. second- need to be worked on/ too much empty space and bad placing of the icons. third great =]
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Ooxo Web commented:
Thanks ;) The full catalog isn't loaded yet but I will keep in mind the icon placement thing
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you should probably look at is fixing the actual site, it's not loading the front page at all.
I like the overall design, it is very green, and maybe a little bit of an overkill on that side.
but why does the earth symbol and the background green ribbon disappear from page to page?
The background image without the green ribbon and the globe is really bare, if you can't going to have those 2 elements on every page then change the background image completely.
One other thing I have just notice on the live site, is that the corners of your rounded boxes aren't aliased - this gives off a very pixelated look.
The navigation blob (for lack of a better word) isn't centering to the text.
You are on the right track, but you need to be careful with colours, and consistencies.
Good Luck
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Ooxo Web commented:
Thanks for those precious elements, only the French version is currently near finish, that's why the first page doesn"t load. Anyway you give me a lot to think ;)
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The site looks pretty nice, but there's so much space, with objects simply hanging around. And the nav box simply does not go well with the use of space. not exactly sure of how to go about it. Colour theme is nice, though.
Thanks for your useful and detail comment, I'll loose the gray bar for sure ;)