Advansis website

Not an easy job, what does an innovation look like...? But anyway I think you should figure that out and use more images (of that theme) on this site.

It's all a little too left... I like the typography great choice of fonts they work well together.

I think the navigation could be bigger and bolder, similiar to that of www.apple.com

Colour scheme is nice... You could probably do a better job.

I like the blue lines, but it would look event better in they changes colours, as you work your way through the different areas of the site.

Great work overall, but if you made a few tweaks here and there it would look awesome.

Hi Miika.

First, I like the colors, design, and the picks.

Just have a review about the type and text part after viewing the site link;

On the navigation type, maybe if you opened up the space between the letters I would be able to read them more comfortably. Maybe even try a different typeface, if it is still a bit difficult to read.

All the blue news button type needs to come up a couple points at least. They are very hard to read.

Final suggestion is to reword all your text. You have sentences that are way to long. Major grammar attention needed. I think the second paragraph is just one whole sentence.

Example of punctuation needing help: We went to the park, as well as, the zoo. ( , as well as, ) Check out paragraph 2 on the front page alone.

Who ever wrote the text needs to have another person proofread it and repair it.

Beyond that, I like the blue swirly swirl pic!

the design is good but i would definitely remove the fractals from the design, rest all good

I like the blue lines, but I dont think the box with gradient fits. The top menu bar is vey dark.

When I looked at the site all i saw was the image. I did not see any content or any where to click. Now, it was all there but the big blue image sucked me in and i did not know where to go from there. If this image was lighter it would make it much easier to read and see the content on your site.

The navigation is clean, but the busy blue lines distract from the design. Also, what purpose does the lines have? If none, fine something the relates.

Don't get me wrong, it is clear that you know how to design things but I think this design is a little to sterile for me liking. There is no emotion, excitement or feeling that makes me want to find out what this site is all about. I also think your message isn't getting through without having to dig into the paragraph. I like sites that as soon as I enter them, I know what they are.

So again, this isn't bad work but just not enough feeling put into it. Hope that makes sense and helps a little.

If I came to the site, I wouldn't know what to do next. There are no calls to action, except the top nav. The imagery does not invoke innovation or analysis.

i feel that you can try using some differnt image rather then this bussy lines...!!