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Concept Reviews
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looks good so far - the illustrations are nicely made, everything seems well laid out.
the audience should be able to navigate easily given their age range and acceptance of computers. . .
i also enjoy the little image in the clubhouse of their avatar picture - it's a nice touch. . .
id like to see this site online a bit more so that it would be easier to see how it all integrates together, and what type of quiz(es) are being used. . . but i dont speak Portuguese so that may be an issue too!
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Not much to change (btw websites for kids are fun to do). There is no navigation shown in images 2 and 3 but maybe that is in the header and you just left it out?
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Carlos Carvalhar commented:the header will be the main navigation, outside the theme. it's not complete yet, so it doesn't appears in all screens.
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Nice idea, but I would add some drawings by hand, or some natural textures to details.
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Carlos Carvalhar commented:
i'm not sure about hand drawings, because everithing is all vectorized, but i liked the tip about natural textures. i'll use it for sure. :)
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love the illustration's but the logo get lost somehow...try to project that as well with the others
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Carlos Carvalhar commented:
yeah, that logo is just there to place something, i'll work in a true logo next week.
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Good design. I like the tree house profile page, a good way to set it up!
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Seems like a fun site! One thing though ... looks a bit vector-y try adding some textures!
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Very nice design, perfectly match with the concept. Bravo !
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Nice artwork, seamlessly integration of contents and layout that seem to blend without any major problems.
As this clearly seems to point to Flash development I believe the animation over these concepts will for sure bring other level of interaction with the kids.
Well thought using a graphical environment for this kind of application.
Good work!
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Carlos Carvalhar commented:
i'd love if i could do it all flash, but this project, at this time, will be html/css with only the quiz page in swf. A shame by now :(
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This site is REALLY hard to judge without knowing how it's going to work. I admire your originality on this design but want to make sure that it's not too out there. Good work so far though, I'd like to see this once you get it on the web.
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Tanya Klecker commented:Great illustrations - the nav doesn't seem to go with the rest of the site.
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Carlos Carvalhar commented:
sure, without the site online, i'd miss something too. i think next week i'll be able to have an online version.
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I agree with others in that it is a bit difficult to gauge these different "areas" without seeing how it works together. So, judging from these images my immediate need is consistent elements to help navigate around and back. It's an elaborate piece, for sure, great job with all of the imagery and environments.
ok, when it's online i'll add a link here.