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Concept Description
- Objective:
- usability,clean,attractive,web 2.0 look
- Target Market:
- anyone
- Categories:
- website design graphic design mockup
Guys!! here is my final version before sending it to client..so shoot as much feedback as possible..
thanks!!
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Concept Reviews
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Everything's nice, but in my opinion, the twitter bird is a little bit to cartoon style to match with the rest of the site, obviously classic. I got a problem with the right column which seems to be off the site.
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Swarat Ghosh commented:can u please tell me in detail abt the prob. regd. the right column...
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Mike Goignan commented:There's not align and no separation. For example, "our showcase" is smaller than "visit us", but got the same style and the same typo. It will be ok if showcase was in a column.
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Mike Goignan commented:
Yes but the column must be visually separated, that's what I mean... Excuse my english !
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Has a great look to it, but seems a little crowded. Do you really need to have two spots with the same social media call to action? (the bird, and then the Visit Us here)
Getting rid of the bird would free up a little real estate.
Does the big, rotating banner have to be so big, or at least so tall? I don't know if the other panels to the banner have the similar layout, but maybe you could shorten it up a bit and gain even more space.
I'd really like to see some space between the Our Offering area, and three bottom blocks of text.
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Remove the twitter bird and the "follow us" -sign, add just a little bit space under the 03-04-buttons and send it your client, its ready
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Really good work here. Good job listening to everyone's feedback and making changes accordingly. The last two changes I would make are as follows. I would change the main pic to something more exciting and interesting. The follow us heading just looks out of place. You don't have that kind animation or text treatment anywhere else in the design. I would stay consistent and just have a regular heading.
Really good work on this site though. You definitely almost have it here!
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There is too much clutter. You should add about 15-20 pixels above every headings. You almost had it in the previous version.
I agree, lose the bird.. and while you're at it lose the little piece of paper it's perched on.