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Concept Description
- Objective:
- simple, yet eye catching
- Target Market:
- individuals, organisations, and business owners
- Categories:
- business card
Hello there,
This is another version of my personal business card. Here, I tried to make it as simple as possible and fit the design of the card to the logo.
Any comment/advice is more than welcome.
Thank your for your time!
Update
Most of you have probably seen that Yitz Woolf, our generous fellow, has designed a new logo and business card for me. That's really kind of him. I thank him once again. After seeing his design, I thought I can make changes in both logo and business card designs of mine. I've uploaded for different versions. Please view them and enlighten me with your critics. Upon your critics, I might alter even the design of my logo and use the one Yitz proposed.
note that, the typeface of the text is Museo. Also, the white and black divisions have the proportion of 40% and 60%, respectively.
Update 2
Thanks to all of you for valuable critics. I've decided which one I'm going to use: the last one in the second version.
Previous Versions
Version 1
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Concept Reviews
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Hi Metin,
I enjoy your logo.
The only thing I see that I maybe would adjust, would be to bring the letters of your name closer together. For, I see they may be evenly spaced from each other, yet due to their unique individual shapes they look oddly spaced.
Also, the leading looks unequal as well. I would maybe bring your name closer to the web/graphic/design (since it is not related by color to your name.)
I like the dark brown and white combo.
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Maybe you should remove the slashes from /web /graphic /design? Anyway I like it much better than the other one, black & white looks good with the logo :)
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Metin Ucar commented:I've dropped the slashes. They were included in order to separate the text. But now I got a different way to separate the text.
The other one? Do you mean the previous version I designed or the one which was designed by our generous fellow Yitz?
Thanks.
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Yitz Woolf commented:She posted this 6 hours ago so it was before the updated versions....
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I prefer the second one of the first two. I would only change the yollowish font color.
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It's just a little not very interesting thing but i noticied that your logo ( one labeled " my version" or "yitz version" looks like the scorpio sign. http://www.exploreastrology.co.uk/images/2002.jpg
Are u scorpio? 'cause it would be even better if it was the case.
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Metin Ucar commented:
No, I'm not scorpio. Yeah, you're right on that it reminds of the logo you attached. an interesting coincidence :)
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The third from the bottom is definitely my favorite. It gives a sense of being modern and contemporary - something that's good for a designer to have.
Easy to read - simple - elegant - and to the point.
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Now I like this! I would like to use a card like that. Only thing that comes to my mind is that maybe, and only maybe I would try a bit smaller font size on the last three lines of text.
I am trying to decide which one is better...hmm...I don't know, they are both good.
One more thing, I think your logo speaks enough of your creativity, so the rest card of card can be very simple and still not look boring.
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Awesome Meting, great job...
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This is a HUGE improvement from your last designs. I think your finally getting it :). Instead of going straight down the middle with your black and white, I might consider doing something more like a 30/70 split with the logo being in the smaller portion and maybe flipped on its side. The gold color needs to be introduced elsewhere as well. I feel like the gold is a little of a spare of the moment idea. You should also lessen the space between "/Web /graphic /design".
You are completely on the right track with this though. Leaps and bounds better than your previous ones. Good direction!
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The logo still irks me!!!!
Hi Metin,
I like Yitz version the most. Due to the fact that the white space made from the m and the u is consistent with each other. In the other versions, due to design of letters or affect of black against white, makes that white space look inconsistent.
I like the addition of the blue.