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I think the problem with your designs have been that there are too many visual elements that are clammering for attention. I would say since your logo is fairly bold and takes a lot of attention, just make everything else simplistic and back to the basics.
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You really need to look at your business card differently than you would anything else, in a lot of cases this is your first shot of making a good impression.
Don't get me wrong, it's better than the first time, but really not that memorable.
Try something out of the ordinary, make it square… or make it thin like a strip of fortune cookie paper, across an otherwise blank card.
Like most things in life, sometimes simply is better.
Body font: try DIN, or Bebas
change the title to something more that web & graphic solutions: maybe interactive design, broaden your horizons...
Good luck
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Miro commented:Metin, Google "business card designs" and check the first results. You'll see some really good cards.
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the orange can be replaced with brick color
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Metin Ucar commented:It looks too bright in comparison to the yellow. The brick colour would be much better.
Thanks.
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Hey,
looks good but it's just not there yet. The text is way to spread out.
Also the color are not the best choice.
Regards, MEster.
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Metin Ucar commented:
Hej MEster,
Apparently, I screwed up a bit =) I'm working on the placement of text, and colours.
btw, Have you seen the alternative version I uploaded? There, in my opinion, the colours look much better, and the text is organised better.
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Mester Catalin commented:Hey,
I don't know if what I'm seing is what I am suposed to, but still some work to be done....just doesn't go well with the logo at all.
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The design is just to busy to me. Relax on the colors and design. What is a business card for? It's for getting your contact information out there, so why not just keep it at that?
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Metin Ucar commented:
Thanks for the critics. I'll listen to your advices and try to come up with something simpler.
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It's not bad at all, but it were mine I would simplify it. (In my own card there is only Adobe Caslon and nothing else and I like it). But this is a matter of taste so I suggest you also listen what others have to say.
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Miro commented:
You are getting there, I like the first one of the updates most. But I would still leave more space around the logo ;-D How should say it... it would respect the logo more, if you know what I mean.
Take a look at these:
http://creativebits.org/files/126898081_a50da43914.jpg
http://reencoded.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/05/18.jpg
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Metin Ucar commented:
Hi there Miro,
I got what you mean. The examples you attached your comment clearly describe the whole point. Right now, I'm browsing through various business card designs to get inspired. Well, I've started to feel like the logo is pushed up, which doesn't look good. This is something what you and other fellows have emphasised. I'm gonna work on it once again, and soon post a new version for review.
Thanks for the advices.
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When I look back, I see that what you're saying makes perfect sense. I'll take some time and focus on simplicity.
Thanks.