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Hey, I would smooth the edges of the castle, also the waterfall on the right needs some more work. The blending of the background on the far right with the waterfall needs some work.
The colors are too dull for my taste, the green but that's just a personal reference.
Lights are definitely off track in this composition maibe you can work on them.
Other then that a great start.
MEster.
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Swarat Ghosh commented:
this is the 2nd version of my prev draft...hope everybudy will like this more then the prev.
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Mester Catalin commented:Hey,
Take your time and fix things don't hide in the shadows... hide little things. The light is missing in this.I liked the 1-st one better just look at it and try to fix details.
MEster.
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Mester Catalin commented:
Much better,
Still hiding some things there but if you don't want to push this any further, no problem.
Great work.
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This isn't a bad concept I just think you need to do some more work on it. The places where the rocks fade into the water falls needs some more work. You have the color correction of the castle down pretty well now you just need to blend the rocks and grass into the waterfall more.
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Swarat Ghosh commented:
thanks Nate for your words of encouragement. I will try to put the things you have suggested in future.
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The lawn, which is on the right hand side of the waterfall on the right, seems to be blurred. Needs to be more vivid. The clouds, particularly on the left hand side, are not realistic. I think it's because of the colour. Go for either a darker shade of the colour you used or grey.
Oh, btw the edges of the ruins of castle are kinda weird, maybe too soft. Have you tried to make them sharper?
thanks MEster nice to read your feedback will defi. take into consideration