ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on arte_en.jpg 1 Try to find a graphic that tells more of a story. This graphic doesn't really tell me much about the school. 2 Could make the language on this button stronger. for example: enroll today or request more info. Positive Feature on arte_en.jpg 1 Nice callout and call to action. New Idea on arte_en.jpg 1 Perhaps making these two content areas side by side columns would help. Right now everything seems a bit to centered. Minor Problem on arte_en.jpg 1 Too much spacing between text and flags. Also try to add a background... or chose a better font for this image! 2 I don't like this grey separator ... seems like it doesn't belong here! Entendeu mermão? ;) Critical Problem on arte_en.jpg 1 Seems it was done in Paintbrush by a 10-year-old! Critical Problem Logo lacks appeal
The logo is very unappealing and does not convey the language training aspect in any manner. It looks like a kids toys brand.Positive Feature Not cluttered
The site is clean and brings out the main points clearly without having to search for them too deepSummary:
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Cleber Alexandre commented:Yes, I could not change the logo, but I'll do a new version to present to the client, maybe she will accept!
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Minor Problem Rearrange the site?
Rearrange suggestion: Start with: Discover new world..... Then picture Then Home / The School / Languages etc. Logo and 3 blocks More Than 19 Languages [drop down menu with languages] Not the buttons.Positive Feature I like
I like: - the 3 colored blocks. Very strong. - the white spaces and lining makes the page very clean.New Idea Ideas:
Ideas: - find pictures which say something about communication. As that is the way you will discover the world after learning the new language. - Be bold. Although the client has asked you to keep the logo intact, why don't modernize it and provide a second proposal, so they see the difference?Summary:
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Cleber Alexandre commented:
Thank you, I'll try to make a new logo together with a new version of the site
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Minor Problem on arte_en.jpg 1 Could be bigger Serious Problem on arte_en.jpg 1 Not a very nice logo, doesn't fit with the rest of the site 2 There's not enough contrast between the grey and the white here, I almost didn't even notice it at first 3 Nothing lines up, are you using a grid based approach? 4 What does this picture have to do with languages? New Idea on arte_en.jpg 1 Don't like "more" .. more what? What about some text to describe what you want me to do? Summary:
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Cleber Alexandre commented:
Thanks for your feedback, I'll do another version based on the comments and submit again for a new evaluation
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New Idea Languages
Maybe you could try using boxes for the flags like you did on the features, kind of like a mosaic. This way you will create a more appealing layout and you will have the same style throughout the site.Positive Feature Nice
Nice design!Minor Problem Design
Smaller sections at the bottom dont seem to work with flat design of the rest of the page. Gradients make them look 3D.Critical Problem No idea what the site is about!
I only got that this is about learning languages from reading Objective and Target market. Had no clue from first 10 sec looking at the homepage. Image is completely useless, but it takes all the attention. Logo doesn't explain anything. Then, eyes jump to big colourful squares. The tagline is the last thing to see. I missed the tagline at all. Don't mean to be rude, but I think negative feedback is way more useful. Having same problem with my work now :) Good luck.
thank you, I'll do another version and submit here again