ZoomConcept Reviews
Summary:
Hi,
That seems like a great mock-up! You have the text and placeholders but now you have to go to align them properly!
Go and align Sign up and Try it with It`s Free with block of text. Add real images and you will see there is needed some space between those three features. Make the tagline from homepage bigger.
Start using a grid and this alignments will be solved.
Anyway - again - seems like a great start!
Minor Problem on Business Model Canvas.png 1 I'd make this contrast more (but not more than the sign-up button), it blends with the background too much and I don't even see it. Maybe orange or yellow? 2 I wish this was black. Maybe that's just a personal thing. 3 Captions would be good here. And probably more space as stated above. Summary:
Its a good start and the layout is probably a sure winner -- but then again almost every other tech-business tool or app I've seen has a similar layout, so you could look into changing it up if you want to stand out more.
Keep up the good work!
P.S. Cool logo.
Summary:
It's a nice design, although I'm not fond of the red.
Also, make sure you check the spelling and grammar, for example "leave us a message" instead of "leave us message".
The idea (business model canvases) is nice, I think the challenge will be to keep the overview on the canvas, to keep it clear and structured when it contains a lot of input. You may also want to consider more items than the ones in the screenshot, such as competition, marketing mix, etc...
