ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on Original.jpg 1 Alert text is too small -- think about making it larger and left justifying it, and center align both the text and the link button within this alert box. Minor Problem on Redesign 1.jpg 1 Not crazy about the diagonal here because it makes this alert seem like a warning or site error rather than just an alert to bring to the user's attention. Try removing it and see how it blends with the rest of the site. -
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Daniel Golden commented:
This is what it looks like without the stripes: http://cl.ly/KPB2
What do you think?
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Maurice Cherry commented:Now it looks like there should be headline of some sort in the alert box. Why not just have the yellow rounded box by itself without that darker yellow portion at the top?
Positive Feature on Redesign 1.jpg 1 Love this button style. I would even think about bumping up the text a bit to make it stand out a bit more. New Idea on Original.jpg 1 Have you thought about styling this so it looks like the green button located in your right sidebar? I feel like that would make this alert a bit more polished. Summary:
The overall design of the website is good; think about putting together a style guide for the site in order to have a baseline for colors, typography, etc. for future updates. See my notes for more details.
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Daniel Golden commented:
Hey, Maurice, your advice is very helpful. Thank you for the input, it's huge!
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New Idea on Original.jpg 1 Full Width Green/Red bar. -
Daniel Golden commented:
Love this idea, man.
Summary:
What about a floating full width alert bar positioned on top ? (like Signup bar)
In this way you don`t have to break the content container and the alert will pop enough so users can see it.
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Daniel Golden commented:
I think that's a great idea, and I'm going to try it out. Thanks a ton, Olaru!
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Olaru George commented:Let
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Daniel Golden commented:
Yeah, for sure.
So these are few ideas I've been tossing around on how exaclty to implement this alert. Maybe sticky, or maybe you only see it when scrolled to the top of the page. I'm not sure. Anyway, here's what I've got: http://cl.ly/KTSv .
I also tried a yellow version.
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Summary:
Good site overall. Navigation was easy and the general message was clear. One issue was the size of the text explaining the children's needs. That just needs to be larger or darker in color to make it easier to read.
Minor Problem on Original.jpg 1 Gray background is a bit hard. I'd prefer to have it lighter. more focus on the Photo Positive Feature on Original.jpg 1 Nice Bio. New Idea on Original.jpg 1 More Photos of kid here would be nice. I need proof that this is a real kid. best done by many photos. Positive Feature Cool
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Daniel Golden commented:
Hey, thanks a lot, Pablo.
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Positive Feature Nice use of elements
You have designed it very strategically. I liked it
That's a good point, thanks for the input.