ZoomConcept Reviews
Summary:
homepage good layout, other pages just needs same attention to detail.
Minor Problem Sex sells but.....
Sex sells but I don't think the main image at the top of the page is right for the concept. It takes the idea a bit off topic. I know she is looking at the text and that is a good thing but I'm sure you could have a different person looking at the message. For me I would probably click straight off because I don't see the relevance here.Serious Problem Goal
I would put the goal last. Not only does this traditionally go last but it's actually a very nice gesture which may persuade people to fund you, so this is a good thing for people to have in their mind at the end point when they are deciding to fund you or not.Summary:
Very nice design and I like the humour. The text really sells you but as I say, I feel the main image doesn't fit the context.
Nice