ZoomConcept Reviews
Summary:
Im not sure why anyone would subscribe to the mailing list? I dont see any benefit to the user? You gotta give em something. Like input on the design or control, or name a feature, or get screenshots of the progress. Something interesting or useful to designers that shows that your company will be valuable and you can prove it to them right now by giving them (you fill in the blank).
another side note on large monitors the what is this is to the far left, and the guy is on the far right, with alot of blank space in between, I would suggest to probably move the what is this further to the right so that It draws my attention. Also run the 5 second test, maybe you should change the text from "waht is this" to something like "calling all freelancers, get your project management on" or "Need to manage your freelance projectst? we can help"
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Summary:
The image is low res. The test is sometimes shadowed and not clear to read.
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Szabolcs Molnar commented:The image has to be this size, otherwise the load time would be too big. I will try to work on the quality.
But giving three 1-s is highly unfair. This is not a critic. This site is about helping each other making better designs. What you are doing is highly destructive. :(
I check your other feedbacks and you give 1s for everybody. Without any reason. I hope the admins of conceptfeedback are going to something with you.
Best.
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Serious Problem on conceptfeedback_preview.jpg 1 This photo won't work well at all browser sizes, you would just see legs that are cut off. -
Szabolcs Molnar commented:
We were working on the site to be responsive as possible. Actually it works pretty well, but it is true that in 1024 it cut the head off a little bit. We have to work more on it. Not so easy to make the photo background fit in every browser size.
Thanks for feedback! :)
New Idea on conceptfeedback_preview.jpg 1 The two things you read first here are "What is this" and "So, are you a freelancer". The name "Asitly" doesn't tell me what this site will do for me either. Something to do with freelancing from the second subhead. So instead of saying "What is this" I would describe in 3-5 words a benefit of your site. -
Szabolcs Molnar commented:
Something like "Manage your project, contacts and many more all on one place!" ?
Nice feedback. Thanks. :)
Summary:
Attractive, simple, friendly.
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Minor Problem "Follow" heading gets lost in white rock
It's going to be easy to miss this.Positive Feature on conceptfeedback_preview.jpg 1 Watch your copy closely. There's really not much on this page, so it needs to be perfect. There are typos ("successful" and "you're gonna") and that's not going to convince people your product is worth their time. Summary:
Basically you're trying to dangle a carrot with this landing page so I'll sign up to hear more. But it doesn't work because I don't understand the carrot enough to bite.
Think about using concrete verbs together with the product shots you're planning to add. Things like "organize workflow. prioritize tasks. streamline billing." or whatever it is. Right now it's just too unclear because your brand name doesn't explain the service (like something like "Dropbox" does).
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Szabolcs Molnar commented:
Thanks for constructive feedback! :)
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Minor Problem on conceptfeedback_preview.jpg 1 Maybe show some Screens here/ Some Awsome helping Features (Dates, Appointments, ..) Serious Problem on conceptfeedback_preview.jpg 1 I would say "Projectmanagement for Freelancers" 2 Shorter and more crisp. 3-5 Points Positive Feature on conceptfeedback_preview.jpg 1 Nice, Strong Logo 2 In Marketing i would always use Girls: Guys like Girls Girls also like to look at Girls (its proven) 3 Add some things to drive credibility: Certificates, Testimonials, Summary:
I like the design. Its nice and clean with a strong call to action
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Szabolcs Molnar commented:
Thanks! :)
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hossein zilan commented:cool and simple
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Summary:
good clean
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Szabolcs Molnar commented:
Please could you give a longer feedback? Why did you give 1 fro usability and for strategy?
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Thanks for feedback.
It is still in development, but probably we are going to put some sexy screenshots about the website what the costumers are going to use. You are right about this.
Then they will see how they can manage there projects, contacts or how can they track there time etc.
hmm... we will have to do this as soon as possible.
Thanks once again for feedback. :)