This is my first revision from a previous concept. Thanks to all who reviewed my previous concept. I am now asking you to step up once more and help me design a ready site. This site is meant to be friendly and relate-able, yet convey us as experts in our field. you can see the first concept HERE
does it capture interest,
is it usable
does it have a clear strategy
I think the portfolio should come before about us. The opening already explains enough about you. The opening catches my attention, so I want to see your work. Having to read more about you first is slightly off-putting.
I like this graphic! Its colourful and eye catching. However, at the same time it seems a little superfluous, as I am not sure how it relates to your business. I'm not sure what messages it is supposed to be sending out.
I quite like this, it has lots of plus points which I have put in my notes.
If possible I would drop the single page layout and split it up into separate pages. I personally hate these single page websites - the navigation interface is very different from regular websites and so is quite confusing to use.
I would also think more about your character. He is quite cute and eye catching, but it's not clear what messages he is supposed to be sending out.
I would also look at how your graphics relate to each other. For example, you start of with a sky background, then have a grey background and then finish with grass. In between you have the character. While it is eye catching and pleasant to look at, it also does run the risk of seeming a little bit random. The solution would be to incorporate more of your header graphics through out the page. You don't want to over do it, but I think you could use them a little bit more than you have at the moment.
Overall this is quite strong, it just needs a little tweaking.
The typography in this is really good. As is the color scheme. The illustrations are solid, but I think a few of them could use a little work (see my notes on the laptop). The buttons and they typography on the buttons could use some work as well. They just don't seem to fit in well for some reason. Also, I think you should put something other than the logo in the nav bar.
I'm a firm believer in when you're introducing a new word or name i.e. Tesani, it has to be as readable as possible and with your current logo, I don't think thats the case. I actually thought that the A was an N but somehow a bit of it had been deleted...
I do like the typography - very effective font selections and good colour choices
Little man down below
Try making the little man below cast a shadow, it'll make the site feel more "sunny" if that makes sense.
Overall, nice design - my only problem really was with the logo - it's not that readable. Typography is nice, colour use is good - maybe experiment with going slightly lighter for the background colour in the about us/previous work sections.