The reviewer above me is absolutely correct--it looks professional and there are no critical design flaw per se. But this sort of design does smack of infomercial salesmanship. The second I navigate to a website that looks like this I backpedal. If you want to follow that formula (by all means, I'm sure a lot of people make a lot of money or else it wouldn't be such a common thing) then go ahead, and you're doing a fine job. But I know this will turn off some people--it just depends on knowing your target audience.