ZoomConcept Reviews
Serious Problem on cloudmapps4.png 1 its not balanced. Summary:
the eye should be clearly focused on 1 thing. look at this landing pages: spreedly.com
BOOM! clean. and clear. reduce yours
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Minor Problem on cloudmapps4.png 1 i'm not sure if they are, but I would make the roundness the same Critical Problem on cloudmapps4.png 1 video is too small even if you want to contrast it with the form Summary:
The design is really really nice. Colors working together perfectly. Nice and consistent typography and form elements. A couple of things in my notes
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Thais Souza commented:I put a new version of my landing page. And I would like to know your comments. Thank you!
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Minor Problem on cloudmapps4.png 1 I think the treatment on the icons and pop up, could be much nicer. Serious Problem on cloudmapps4.png 1 Too much empty space at the bottom of this form. Critical Problem on cloudmapps4.png 1 I feel a serious disconnect, between the top area and the bottom content. I think you can fix this by rearranging your information on the page. Maybe the top area is taking up too much space... There's way too much open space between the information blocks. 2 too much space between this area Positive Feature on cloudmapps4.png 1 love the brand. Summary:
Hey Thais, nice work. I feel like the information isn't organized as well as it could be. There are a lot of spacing issues between elements. I dropped a couple notes for you, hope it helps :)
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Thais Souza commented:
I put a new version of my landing page. And I would like to know your comments. Thank you!
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Minor Problem Featured area background color
There's too much contrast between the dark solid blue in the featured area versus the main page.Positive Feature Simple sign-up form
Clear message, directly playable video and immediate call-to-actionSummary:
As a landing page, I think it's pretty decent. It has the explanatory video and right next to it an easy sign-up form. With some minor tweaks, the overall design is in the right direction.
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Thais Souza commented:
I put a new version of my landing page. And I would like to know your comments. Thank you!
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Serious Problem Functionality
Overall, I'm not sure what this site does. I can guess that it lets me store maps, which is a nice idea, but I think it would help to try and find some symbolism to make this obvious in the first glance.Positive Feature Look & Feel
Overall the layout is quite nice, with balanced colors, icons, and features.New Idea Functionality
I cannot read the text, but my impression is that I would not be likely to scroll down and read the text below without some more activity at the bottom of the blue background field. Some how my eyes and attention are directed upwards rather than down towards the content.Summary:
Overall a nice, clean, straightforward design that looks very professional. A few tweaks might help to make the purpose of the tool more obvious and engage the reader to learn a bit more.
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Thais Souza commented:
I put a new version of my landing page. And I would like to know your comments. Thank you!
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It has very nice design, but as a user it is hard to tell what it the value proposition. Why do I need these particular maps?
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I love the clean simplistic nature of the UI.
The bottom 1/2 of the page is excellent with a great use of sub categories and a very professional and modern footer layout.
Overall I think this looks great! I could not find where to go to test the app for functionality but from design I really like this.
The only thing I might do is add a bit more flashy graphics to the UI. Nothing overboard but just something custom to spice up the top header and maybe a low alpha background image behind the map, but nothing that would visually distract from your great looking map interface.
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Bad:
- You have 2 actions calls on your featured area. Which is bad. Make one clear action cal, either watch video or subscribe. Usage of 2 action calls simultaneously is a bad idea, as distracts users and they might leave site at all, as couldn't choose.
- Space at right of map on left bottom corner on featured area should be used, maybe some moto or slogan?
- Logo looks poor, logo needs some space.
- Black bar on top looks a bit distracting, maybe form elements are too big and does not give enough space for logo, maybe to remove it all. Use some nice "balloon" for login box)
- Lack of images on "Mapeando seus Projetos" area
Good:
- You have used clear rows for different content
- I like the map on left bottom corner on featured area
- Usage of video with explanation
- Usage of clear columns and rows on "Mapeando seus Projetos" area
Minor Problem on Second version 1 Empty space 2 Empty space 3 boring, grey Serious Problem on Second version 1 This icon set is very popular (at least i saw it many times). Try to work on your own icons. Also use different icons for diferent features here. Maybe you dont need 6 features? 2 It can be missed by many users. When they see logos carousel, they may not see this 3 links as links :) Positive Feature on Second version 1 Like colors. USE THEM ON SITE! they will bring live to it :) New Idea on Second version 1 Why not use same styling as google login background with opacity? You could use this blue background on whole page area Summary:
Second one is nicer, you worked on lower part and that's good. What i dont like, is that you're wasting a lot of space in "fold". This registration box (i think) on map, is much to high. You could easly put it between black header background and map - 2 fileds , and google login button whit short copy like "Register with your Gmail" i.e.
One big tip - use colors from logo - they are very nice and it should give your design a bit of life and fresh feel
I don't understand much. From what i see, i still dont know what your app/site will do , which is not good.
I put a new version of my landing page. And I would like to know your comments. Thank you!