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on Feb 07, 2012

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we are trying to drive at the hearts of individuals who are tasked with protecting children's lives and the assets of schools.

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Posted on Feb 08, 2012 at 1:52 PM
Serious Problem

fonts
the 2 styles dont gel well. the top one is too techy also alignment issues.

Serious Problem on davis3.jpg
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fonts man.. fonts.

Positive Feature
kill the noise
Arturino

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Design: 2

Usability: 2

Strategy: 4

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Steve Wilmes commented:

Posted: on Feb 09, 2012 at 1:47 AM

Artur, Thanks for your time. Appreciate the constructive feedback.

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Posted on Feb 08, 2012 at 5:25 AM
Joshua Oliver

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Design: 3

Usability: 2

Strategy: 2

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Summary:
Hard to understand the copy.
Steve Wilmes commented:

Posted: on Feb 09, 2012 at 1:46 AM

Joshua, thanks for your time. Would you be able to provide a little additional feedback on "hard to understand" - is that for all of them or one. Thanks.

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Serious Problem
	fonts the 2 styles dont gel well. the top one is too techy also alignment issues.
Serious Problem on davis3.jpg
1
1	fonts man.. fonts.
Positive Feature
	kill the noise