ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on http://184.172.187.64/~vulcano/ 1 aHA! I found something useful to comment on: typography. Something was bugging me about these buttons, the were too... too much something. Perhaps a slight bit too large. Then I noticed that the lettering was nice and modern on them, and does not look like your category headings ("Categories", "Best Selling", "Shopping Cart", etc.). Looking closer, I see two (or three?) sans-serif fonts in use, creating what has been called a "conflict of similarity." In short, making all the fonts match *exactly* will make for a more polished presentation. Minor Problem on http://184.172.187.64/~vulcano/golden-thunder/golden-thunder/ 1 On the product page, you use this nice touch to make your photos look more "finished". But you do not use the same touch on the photos in "best selling", nor the ones on the Home page. This looks, to me, like an opportunity to give your work a little more polish. New Idea on http://184.172.187.64/~vulcano/ 1 I see what you're doing with the category headings and the border space to set the sub-area apart, but... I see a slight rounding or bevel in the heading-background graphic, but none in the box. It's creating a slight impression of mis-alignment. It might be fixed by using a comparable amount of corner-rounding on these white boxes. See my next note. 2 Like here, the bottom-buttons have a rounding on them, and it lends a nice "finished" appearance that makes it look more in harmony with the "Best Selling" category heading. Perhaps if the top corners were subtly rounded too? Summary:
Overall, I'm not going to have much to say; this work is too good. However, I'll point to a couple of areas that draw my eye a bit.
Minor Problem on http://184.172.187.64/~vulcano/ 1 I'm not in love with the black separation between the body and the sidebar Items. I would recommend attaching the white to the red headers and the body (maybe with a slight shadow to show depth). 2 These buttons are hard to scan being that they are the same color as the rest of the content. For ease of use I would make the background a slightly darker grey (#efefef) just to allow it to separate from the content above it. New Idea on http://184.172.187.64/~vulcano/ 1 Have you thought of what happens with longer titles? Does your text wrap? I would recommend pulling the boxes out of the container or replacing them with left right arrows and having 5 smaller boxes show there current position in the slider. New Idea on http://184.172.187.64/~vulcano/golden-thunder/golden-thunder/ 1 What if you took this content and placed it to the left under the photos. This would allow you more room and separates the static information (table) from the main content (description) in a condensed area and brings the important description Higher on the page. Summary:
In short the Colors and static frame are solid. Work on cleaning up the incidentals and this should be a great template for your client :-)
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Scott Greenwell commented:Thank you for the Award :-) As a clarification to the sidebar separation. Keep the black separation between headers but attach the top and side.
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Minor Problem Button
I would change the button colors. Or I would stylize them.Font color
I would change the font color to a darker grey.Slider buttons
Why don't you try to get the slider buttons smaller?Summary:
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Vitor Marcellino commented:If you want other people to give you feedback, please give some useful feedback to others.
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Minor Problem Italics
Not a fan of italicized text unless it's really necessary – i.e. to emphasize content.Readability
Not sure how big this issue is because it's hard to tell from the screenshot, but the white on black text areas seem like they may be difficult to read, so should be contrast-tested.Positive Feature Style
At first I thought the colours used seemed heavy but given the subject matter, the combination seems appropriate and I like it.Positive Feature Nice- but...
I like it but the product pictures just aren't clear enough.Minor Problem Out of stock
you out of stock i dont like much, its the same color as the text and pricing, i would change the color of your pricing text to something different,Positive Feature nav bar
Really like the colors overall and the nav bar, but i would increase the height and possibly width of the hover roll over effect you have, its a little small,New Idea Product pages
I would increase the product image size and lower he font too on the product page
