ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on 02_BlueDesign.jpg 1 You seem to have some spacing issues; try 960 Grid plugin Serious Problem on 02_BlueDesign.jpg 1 Too much space! Positive Feature on 02_BlueDesign.jpg 1 Nice typography here. LIKE New Idea on 02_BlueDesign.jpg 1 These scream for a shine, shadow or something; spice them up 2 Make these italic, OR use a serif font. Will help with typography 3 Spice these up too. Summary:
Hi there, Agus!
Great template, looks clean and professional. I could identify some minor spacing, negative space and typography issues, and some elements that could be a bit fancier.
Best regards, Nikos Roussounelos
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Agus Riyadi commented:thank you for your comment it'svery helpfull :)
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i really got some inspiration from this may be changing the dates like 2001 - 2008 needs to be blue box with may be light gray text would do the job great work
Minor Problem on 02_BlueDesign.jpg 1 A lot of space between the name/title area and the personal statement. 2 I think this would look awesome if you decreased the leading a bit. New Idea on 02_BlueDesign.jpg 1 How would it look if it read straight across like so: available for hire ...? Summary:
Augus, this is a great design. Very well thought out and constructed! There's a few leading issues here and there, but this is a solid piece. I wish you the best on this project.
Minor Problem on 02_BlueDesign.jpg 1 I think the CV will look better without the "AVAILABLE FOR" text. Removing it will get more space between "Hire and Freelance Work" and "My Skill Set". Think of it. Serious Problem The Colors
The colors are perfectly used. I like them.The typography
The fonts are very well used. Really good job there.Summary:
I really like the resume you've made. It looks professional. Keep up the good work.
Serious Problem Structure & Layout
I love the structure and the layout and that the essentials are all above the fold. Major points for managing to come up with an aerated and spacious design while still featuring enough content.Readability
The font is easy to read, neat and without unnecessary decorations. I'm excited to see a design that truly facilitates a quick scanning through the page: the sections are clearly titled and properly boxed and spaced.New Idea Saving features
This is a great online resume template, however, recruiters will want to save it locally and/or forward it via email. I think it is critical to provide a "download as..." link together with an email feature, possibly up in the header next to the social media icons. Unless recruiters can quickly get a resume copy that they can enter into whatever applicant tracking system they use, few would go through the pain of saving a web page locally and then turn it into .pdf or .docx.Summary:
Outstanding layout - simple and catchy. In my opinion, there's only one feature missing, that of having a quick way of saving the resume.
Good review Nikos... Regarding typography: http://www.smashingmagazine.com/2010/12/14/what-font-should-i-use-five-principles-for-choosing-and-using-typefaces/