ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on WorkMate Tour-174443.png 1 needs to be reworked into a gallery of videos. Minor Problem on WorkMate Latest activity across all projects-175010.png 1 needs work - see this guide: http://patternry.com/p=data-table/ Serious Problem on WorkMate Collaboration and Project Management Platform-174344.png 1 If this is an important call-to-action, it's placed far too low in the page 2 This may be missed - because it requires deep scrolling 3 This is a 'floating' element - and really tells no story Positive Feature on WorkMate Collaboration and Project Management Platform-174344.png 1 I find this area compelling Summary:
Hi Bulat
There are several compelling, well presented elements in this template. The critical issue however is - the background color drains excitement from the design.
I encourage you to explore treatments that are more contemporary like:
- http://www.invisionapp.com/
- http://www.smashingmagazine.com/2010/05/13/principles-of-minimalist-web-design-with-examples/
- http://www.landing-page-gallery.com/
If your goal is to increase registration - you need to make that you central focus. Refer to this guide to help you layout this template: http://unbounce.com/docs/12-step-conversion-rehab.png
Also -- you need to make the site more persuasive (more engaging at a subconscious level to the visitor) Watch this video to learn more about the 'value' of persuasive techniques http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=3J85SUZFXNM
I encourage you to go back to simple wireframes (in Visio or Balsamiq Mockups) to workout the layout issues.
MichaelR+
Minor Problem on WorkMate Collaboration and Project Management Platform-174344.png 1 This is personal preference here, so forgive me if I sound nit-picky. I prefer having similar items grouped together. So I'd have the screen shots all on one side and the text on the other. To my eyes its easier to scan things when they are grouped together. Positive Feature on WorkMate Collaboration and Project Management Platform-174344.png 1 These are a bit confusing to me. Since they are not links, I don't understand their purpose being there or what they mean to your brand. I also do not know what any of them mean, except maybe the cloud. New Idea on WorkMate Collaboration and Project Management Platform-174344.png 1 Since these are major links in your global navigation, could that area use button/icons like these? 2 I might use an image or collage of people collaborating with tools your software is designed for, rather than screen shots of the product. A image like that may help to get your brand across. Plus you have images of the product on the Tour page. New Idea on WorkMate Tour-174443.png 1 I'm going to agree with the first reviewer, Michael, and suggest that this be turned into a video or series of videos. Summary:
Hello Bulat. Great start to your site! I did not have any issues with the usability of your site. I think you have done well to make it user friendly.
I did make some comments about a few things related to the aesthetics and branding of the site. It is important to create a feeling of what the product is and how it can fit into the spectrum of the user rather than simply showing the product and saying it works. I hope this helps!
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I'm an believe in keeping as much as possible above the "fold".
This is a pretty long page for the home page considering there is not a lot here, maybe smaller screenshots that expand when clicked.
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Ok the site design was ok just too long suggest you put a auto scroll up button at the bottom of the page also the translation men was a good feature but i did not notice it until i say let me see what the thing in the corn all in all good concept but page too long
Serious Problem on WorkMate Collaboration and Project Management Platform-174344.png 1 These icons don't match with the rest of the site. Look like they came from a free icon pack. You might want to create them yourself without the glossy effect because nothing else on the site is glossy. Make these icons like the Tour and Sign Up buttons. These need to be consistent. Positive Feature on WorkMate Collaboration and Project Management Platform-174344.png 1 Great button design 2 I like the letter press effects. Nice Summary:
Too much white space and borrowed design elements that aren't consistent. I would make all elements consistent keeping the cool letter press effect.
Homepage: What you should do is position the screen shots to the right and to the left of it say "Improve your collab.." Under that add a little more detail about the software. I would need a little bit more information before I would want to take the tour or sign up. Currently I have to scroll down and get that information.
Homepage: I would get rid of the 4 icons and the entire box below it. And replace it with the tour page set up and content.
Registration: I would make the signup button shorter (in my opinion) and centered instead of spanning across the form box.
Overall, the letterpress effects and texture are good, but the layout needs to be rethinked.
