ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on photographer.png 1 Add some spacing between the title and content. 2 Give the titles a different color than the content 3 This is getting lost in the background. Try changing the color of the ribbon 4 Add some spacing above your social icons 5 There seems to be some inconsistant spacing in your contact form Positive Feature on photographer.png 1 Love the taped profile pic New Idea on photographer.png 1 The gradient is a little harsh, try a lighter blue for the header color 2 The clouds are taking some of the impact away from the photos. Try reducing their size 3 Try adding a drop shadow to these images to make them pop 4 I'm not sure if I like the blue tones here. It reminds me of any movie where someone is being operated on..or where someone just died. You could also try reducing the size just a bit. Summary:
You've got a great start here, just a few inconstancies in the alignments.
I mentioned this in the details on the left, but the blue tones you used on the images reminds me of death scenes or hospitals in just about every movie. Just something to keep in mind :)
Cant wait to see the next revision!
-Simon
Minor Problem on photographer.png 1 Not certain what this is??? 2 these cloud-like images do not work with the other graphical images 3 fields may not be wide enough to capture text Critical Problem on photographer.png 1 I'm not a fan of this treatment. As a primary banner or headers -- this really is not "saying" anything Positive Feature on photographer.png 1 Good area 2 Good footer Summary:
Yunus ~
I think this is a good start. What's not working for me is - the header area doesn't really work.
- Not certain whether the top of this page needs a logo, and some navigation. Is this a "one page blog template?" I can't tell (which may be a design flaw)
- The header treatment is too distracting. Not certain what you're striving for. The cloud image detracts from the photos. You should avoid that approach.
- The color works - retain the balance within within each section (the blue and white makes type very easy to read)
- The footer area is well crafted
Keep going on this design. I encourage you to drop back to black and white (minimal wireframes) which will ensure that you workout the elements of the design -- without relying on color and detailed treatments.
Best of luck
Michael+
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Great concept. Social icon is not looking fit here or need some space for social icon. over all it is ggod.
Minor Problem on photographer.png 1 Some kind of subtle shade will help you to give the photos a sense of position in the general composition. 2 Keep in mind the fold! Serious Problem on photographer.png 1 The clouds looks very different to the icons. In the other hand, it's only one cloud cloned... do a couple more. Minor Problem on photographer.png 1 Make it straight Summary:
I like the simplicity of this website. The portfolio type is just what you need! Very clean and organized.
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Clean Freash Design very nice too would buy this site in a min but the middle kind a let it now with it to an extent i was expecting more and in all a go blend of colours and and stand out design
Minor Problem on photographer.png 1 Not looks aligned to me! Positive Feature on photographer.png 1 I think you need to give some space here to make it readable also need bolder font and darker color! Summary:
As a one-pager, this is great. Very attractive. The one thing I have a problem with are the big icons for photography, Design and Writing - not sure they fit in with the pictures and clouds above, vs. the zig-zag on the bottom. Seems like too many design styles involved here .
Minor Problem on photographer.png 1 Too much text, blend in some pullquotes or dropquotes Serious Problem on photographer.png 1 I realise the fonts and sizes are not final; if not, both the images and the fonts need to be toned down considerably! Positive Feature on photographer.png 1 Love this New Idea on photographer.png 1 I'd replace the social boxes with monochrome, white icons 2 Whilst I love the idea, the execution seems a bit poor; I'd love it if the whole top could be replaced with a big photo, nicely blending into the body Summary:
I realise that this template is for low budget, one-page websites that simply need to get to the point, and, as such it pretty much nails it.
My major complaint / point would be the font sizes / typography (maybe another font? - Google Fonts or Cufon would be ideal) and the top (not the idea, the current execution)
