| Minor Problem on Draft - no menu.jpg | |
| 1 | Something about these starburst seems a little off. Like they're squished or maybe they just feel a little dated to me. A newer icon here might feel a little better in my opinion. |
| 2 | I'm not really sure what this icon does or means. The shopping cart next to it is very self explanatory. This one is not. |
| Positive Feature on Draft - Menu.jpg | |
| 1 | I love the way you've high-lighted a deal of the day in the navigation like this. Great use of an oversized pop-up menu. |
| New Idea on Draft - no menu.jpg | |
| 1 | I know you have a "See all" button in the top right, but you might want to also consider either duplicating it at the bottom, or including some pagination links.
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| 2 | Maybe an icon here would help to draw extra attention to this "Deal Box" navigation item.
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| 3 | Shouldn't this banner area have a promo for an item in the section that you're in, in this case a mobile phone? |
I don't think there are any things that are "wrong" with this design. Overall it looks great and seems like it will function very well.
| Minor Problem on Draft - no menu.jpg | |
| 1 | Consider adding a buy now button next to the more info button |
| 2 | Logo can still be on the left |
| 3 | too crowded |
| 4 | good footer - but not enough contrast |
| Serious Problem on Draft - no menu.jpg | |
| 1 | move to a sub-level page |
| Serious Problem on Draft - Menu.jpg | |
| 1 | visually complex |
M Ami ~
There a lot going on in this portal. I normally don't write such a brief review - but, you need to simplify this design by eliminating content and features. Simply put -- this is visually overwhelming.
I encourage you drop back to a simple black and white wireframes (use a tool like Balsamiq Mockups). Workout all of the design issues, by working out in a lower fidelity.
MichaelR
| Minor Problem | |
Text alignmentUse center-aligned justified text so "Our" doesn't stick out past "Shop". | |
| Serious Problem | |
DiscountDiscount tags shouldn't hide product photo. Resize them. | |
| Positive Feature | |
Price DiscountPrice Discount shouldn't cover the product photo. Mover it more to left or make smaller. | |
Now that I see them again, I think there are just too many "bursts" in the starburst, makes it look a little too busy, compared to something like this : http://a.dryicons.com/images/iconsets/coquettepart7iconsset/png/128x128/buynow.png