ZoomConcept Reviews
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It is difficult to understand what it is.Positive Feature sry
Difficult to say what is good about it. Perhaps the idea of the iconmenu.Summary:
I would start it all over again.
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Aaran Casey commented:What their trying to say is that it looks like a Microsoft design about 20years ago…
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Minor Problem on science-infuse.png 1 This section here needs work. The alignments are off, the icons don't convey clearly what they are meant to do. Overall, aside from the search box, this section is very confusing in regards to it's purpose and its layout. 2 This text is not well designed enough, nor is it important enough to take up as much space as it does. Consider aligning it to the left and moving it to where "Science-infuse, c'est" currently exists. 3 This text is pointless. People understand when they come to a web site that what shows up on the site IS what the site is about. When you go to Amazon.com, you don't see a line of text at the start of the content that says "This is what Amazon is:". It's just understood. 4 This grey here should match the grey in your header. Or vice versa. Serious Problem Consider using a grid
I agree with the other commenter that mentioned using a grid. Take a look at something like http://960.gs to get an idea for how a grid system will help you lay out and structure your design better.Serious Problem on science-infuse.png 1 This logo needs some serious work. It does not seem to fit with the over all look and feel of the site at all. Positive Feature on science-infuse.png 1 I don't think this is necessary at all. It invokes feelings of the Microsoft paper clip and that's generally not a good thing. Plus, the drawing seems out of place compared to the rest of the site. 2 What do you have a link for home AND and icon for home? You need to merge these two menus together into one menu. I suggest bringing the menu down from top alignment to be aligned at the bottom of this header bar. 3 These boxes are done very well and look very great. My only comment would be to consider increasing the spacing between the bottom of the icons and the words under them. Then remove the shadows from the icons that have them and instead create a single horizontal line that separates the bottom of the icon from the 4-5 word description below. Serious Problem on science-infuse.png 1 avoid use of icons 2 too crowded 3 too crowded Summary:
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Considering the other feedback - the consensus is for a complete start-over. I imagine you knew that when you posted the landing page:
A new starting point
- update based on patterns and templates that already work Try not to reinvent the wheel. In the linked example -- notice how the information "is" just one click away -- which is a stated desired outcome
- Notice how readable the fonts are (this is primarily important to your new attempt). This where the current design concept is most lacking
- Avoid the icons - and make more contemporary by following the approach in the attached link
Start with a commercial template - leveraging some of the best practices to drive home the value proposition and goal of the Science-infuse.com site.
MichaelR
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Il me n'est pas très claire que je puisse obtenir : des informations ? Après Bienvenue sur Science infuse.com il faut un sous titre qui explique ce qu'on puisse obtenir et ce qu'on doit y mettre
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Spacing, sizing and layout need to be reconsidered urgently.
Try your hardest to work to a grid, and used a standard layout, 960pixels works well.
Googling 960 grid will yield lots of references.
Positive Feature The padding between icon and text can be increased. Padding need over here. Other You can change the icon, it is not looking attractive. Summary:
Electro
Overall you need to concentrate on Typography and alignments, padding.
I'd agree, the icons need to have more consistency between them.