| Minor Problem on Detangl deals page.png | |
| 1 | use this template as a guide http://livedemo00.template-help.com/magento_36700/mens.html Notice how organized the list of product are... |
| Serious Problem on Detangl landing page.png | |
| 1 | Competes with the task below |
| Critical Problem on Detangl landing page.png | |
| 1 | this concept does not work... There is no call to action (CTA) button integrated into this area. I would imagine that the CTA signing up. That CTA seems very disconnected from the Ad banner area |
| 2 | This is the primary CTA. This is subordinate to the other content -- which needs to be corrected |
| 3 | Redo if possible |
Shoji -
You're going to need a new template if you hope to grab a visitors attention. From a process perspective, start off by producing wireframes using a tool like Balsamiq Mockups. You may also find it useful to:
Simply put -there is a lot of visual clutter in the samples you've provided. Simplify as much as possible.
MichaelR
Definitely a good start. The landing page and the main deals page looks like they're from two different websites. Things need to be a little more consistent, especially with that logo that doesn't match the feeling of the rest of the site.
| Minor Problem on Detangl landing page.png | |
| 1 | You can delete the embosses and give the arrows a little opacity shadow and they can look relief |
| 2 | You can change the color of the buttons with little lighter like the background color and reduce the emboss levels. |
| 3 | You can increase the ton of blue and change the color of text to white. Light blue is always better with white... |
The template looks fine to me except the buttons and the text color.
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Great ideaJust what the market needs, I would certainly use you! Design is simple, clear - i think it works well | |
| Positive Feature | |
Well doneOverall well done with the clean layout an easy to follow ui leading to the sign up. | |
LogoLove the logo. | |
The little white guys are used a lot on other sites but you have done a good job with them.
| Positive Feature | |
styleNice idea - but the look for the site is a bit dated. Combination of older style gradations and buttons. The 3d guys are too cliparty. Arrows look old/boring. You could use some of that bright color in your logo to help create some excitement in this design | |