| Minor Problem on bcard concept 1.jpg | |
| 1 | An orange logo doesn't really stand out on an orange background. |
| 2 | These corner speech bubbles don't work at all. Putting them in the corner completely unbalances the design. The are also a bit superfluous, as one expects a web designer to love websites. |
| 3 | Like Vinicius Machado mentions, the QR code dominates the design. |
| New Idea on bcard concept 1.jpg | |
| 1 | I would put your logo on the front to anchor your brand. |
| 2 | Given the limited space of a business card, it would be better to leave the QR code for 'those in the know' rather than trying to explain how QR codes work. If someone doesn't already have a QR code reader, they probably wont be bother to download one. |
QR codes are cool. But I'm unsure how useful they are, especially as most phones require you to download a reader first. I think they will only be useful among tech enthusiasts.
On the whole this is quite a solid design. The use of orange on your card is good as it makes it stand out.
However, if it has one weakness is that it's not instantly clear what the card is about. Most people only give a cursory glance to a business card, especially if they have several other ones in their wallet, competing for attention.
On your card, I would have to take a few seconds to read the card to see what it is about.
Consider using an eye catching images that relates to web design. This will obviously be tricky, as web design is bit of an abstract concept.
I also think it might be worth try to communicate the USP of you services. Obviously, this is just a business card and not a flyer, so you don't need to go into a depth. However, a good tag line could encourage an interested person to make the call to contact you.
I agree, it needs a tagline. sorry to piggyback on your review Madhu, but you pretty much touched on all the points I would have said :-) nice review
| Minor Problem | |
The size of the letter in the front.I just think that you can make them a little bigger. So it's gonna be easier to read. The contact information is very important... It seems that the QR Code is more important than anything else. | |
| Positive Feature | |
QR Code useI think it's a brilliant idea to use QR Codes. I use them in my cards and it's a very special thing to creat a talk around it. | |
I like people with QR Codes in their cards. It's a very smart move.
| Serious Problem | |
Ads cute iconsIt seems that you want your clients to feel that DVI webs services is a creative team. Why not add a cute and funny icon there. | |
| Critical Problem | |
LOGO colorThe logo doesn't stand out of the back side of your business card, you may want to change the color setting. | |
| Positive Feature | |
Love QR codeIt is very creative to use QR code, love it. | |
| New Idea | |
FontsYou should highlight your contact information more, use big font size. create another slogan to replace "we love website" and "we love technology". They are not impressive enough, every company can say that. So what make your service unique? | |
| Minor Problem on bcard concept 1.jpg | |
| 1 | Not a huge fan of these. It seems corny. |
| New Idea on bcard concept 1.jpg | |
| 1 | Might consider increasing the size of the font |
| Other on bcard concept 1.jpg | |
| 1 | Does the QR code have to be this big? |
The card might be a bit too orange for my tastes. The use of the QR code is nice, especially given that this is a web services company. I'm not sure how many people would actually use it (just typing in a phone number is easier for me) but it get people's attention
| Minor Problem | |
Bigger and bolder.The employee name should be bigger and bolder. The contact information like telephone numbers and websites should also be larger for easier access. | |
| Positive Feature | |
Good color choice!Loving the eye catching orange. Go bold or go home. | |
The orange stands out and is a good eye catcher. However, I'm thinking the employee name should be bigger and bolder and have the website/telephone contact information a little bit larger because it's a little small to read.
| Minor Problem | |
LogoI thought your company logo was the QR code as its so big in comparison to everything else. Also, phone numbers and email address are very small, i think they would cause an issue once gone to print | |
| Positive Feature | |
Eyecatching...Great colour scheme, love the strength of black orange and white. | |
| New Idea | |
slight changesPerhaps make the logo the large part on the back, QR and instructions smaller. Repeat logo on the front to ensure branding is concrete. Not sure you need so many gimmiks on one card - either the QR code or the speech bubbles, keep it simple :) | |
I think that the QR code should be smaller, it takes priority over everything else right now. It would be easier to scan as well. QR codes are everywhere right now so making this the main focal point of the business card is a little gimmicky.
The only think I would change is the logo BG, maybe make it white, with the logo and DVI in the orange. That's about it. Everything else looks great.
Really like the idea with a cod scanning.
If i received this card, I would say it's simple but smart, probably that's what i'm looking for.
In other hand not everyone use a smartphone, so it's just useless to them. But still it's live a good impression.
As for design it's have a good placement for all elements.
| Minor Problem on bcard concept 1.jpg | |
| 1 | Dont like the quote boxes in the corners |
| 2 | Thats a Big QR code.. I like QR codes but not sure it need to be that big. It takes away fro the company name |
| Serious Problem on bcard concept 1.jpg | |
| 1 | Where is the logo. If this is the front you should use the logo |
Not sure which is the front or the back. Even if that doesn't matter I think it can be thought out a little better
| Serious Problem | |
Orange logoOrange logo on orange background, not the best idea | |
The QR code is smart, and a very nice idea, but I think very few of your possible clients know what QR codes are and how to use it. With this in mind I wouldn't dedicate the whole back of the business card to this, it draws all the attention.
| Positive Feature | |
QR CodeI actually like the big QR code on the back, though maybe it could be less of a focus, maybe 3/4 that size. | |
I actually like the big QR code on the back, though maybe it could be less of a focus, maybe 3/4 that size.
I agree