ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on Old Version 1 make much larger - right now this is subordinate to other elements on the page 2 too small Summary:
Reyaah -
There's a lot of energy with the large "swoosh' image. You need to make certain that it does not over-power the purpose of the card -- which is communicate key contact information.
- Create the correct visual hierarchy (company name, person on the card, phone, email, etc.)
- Use the "swoosh" image to draw the audience's eye to the information.
- Use color to create a strong visual signal - so the viewer can differentiate high value information from other lower value information. (see the SNR theory)
- Creative Business Card designs
Good luck...
MichaelR
Minor Problem on Old Version 1 My personal preference would be to spell out "email" and "cell" etc. I think it is clearer than icons (though yours are good) and would integrate more smoothly into a design. 2 This looks like a condensed typeface. You will get better readability with a standard or bold face. 3 Unless the company is specifically wanting to project a casual image, this should be capitalized. I don't know what part of the world they are located in, but I have never seen an accent mark on "president." -
Reyaah commented:It's French - spelt the same as in English with the addition of the accent mark.
Serious Problem on Old Version 1 Why two email addresses? Does the company have a web address? If so, it should be on here. Definitely include the street address. Without it, the company seems to be fly-by-night. Critical Problem on Old Version 1 Use only a detail of the swoosh as a background element. Make the logo larger. Right now, the logo is overpowered by the swoosh. -
Reyaah commented:
Very good point. Thanks.
Summary:
Hi Reyaah,
The swoosh is overpowering the logo. Try using just a portion of the swoosh as an accent and drop the lower line altogether.
l'm uploading a quick example of what I am suggesting. Obviously, this needs much work, but it does suggest one idea you might consider.
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Reyaah commented:
Hello Tim,
Thanks a lot for your input. It was very helpful. I have uploaded a new version and also two versions for the back of the card. I'm looking forward to your comments on these.
Thanks,
Reyaah
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Minor Problem on Old Version 1 This is is way too busy for me, especially for a company that seems pretty corporate. I don't like the idea of having two sets of the shapes. Minor Problem on New Version - Front 1 I'd increase the size of the font. Might also consider making it darker (e.g., black) to improve readability. Positive Feature on New Version - Front 1 I like this one. It's simple and attractive. It looks professional without looking boring. Other on Back of Business Card - Vertical 1 Is this meant to be the back of the business card? It seems like this will make it much more expensive. You might also consider listing the 3 companies on the front of the business card as well Summary:
I like the last one, especially if you make a few minor changes.
Minor Problem font
font looks very popular..Serious Problem yellow color
yellow color looks fade...Critical Problem color
try to use the green blue color combination for the text alsoPositive Feature Color
good color combination of merging green and blue..Other colour usage
work on good pair of colorsSummary:
The concept of design is not able to understand. In my perspective try to use two color combination for the logo. green and blue color will be good... Any how good attempt.
All the best...
Critical Problem on Old Version 1 Text too small... New Idea on Old Version 1 Add things like address etc. 2 Might be able to cut business cards to fit part of the swoosh shape Summary:
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Sorry, it reminds me of a Powerpoint presentation. I know it's supposed to be professional, but the colours on this are plain dull...
Minor Problem Double Logo
I don't like how the logo seems to be repeated twice on #1
Hello Michael,
Thanks you very much for your input. I have uploaded a new version and also two versions of the back of the card.
Looking forward to your comments.
Regards
Reyaah