ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on landing-page-concept.jpg 1 Write a real title here, it's the first thing we see 2 I like the presentation ! but If you make lists with icons, food icons everywhere. Be careful not to have the same proposals in the left column and right column. Question of consistency, it is not the same offer. Serious Problem on landing-page-concept.jpg 1 The navigation arrows of the slider are the only outside of the overall design. One might think that this will affect the entire page, whereas that for the slider. Even if I do not like the items stored too :-) I think it would make more sense to put them inside the white border. If you have two levels of slides like on the screenshot, sure that this is not confusion! 2 What we upload? Here I do not understand what it is. On the left, there's just one sentence, no commercial hook, a rather small text that does not prompt to download something. The 3download window below are much more explicit. 3 If you speak to people who will sell products or services, do not put these kinds of illustrations. 4 If it's a product overview, selected photos of products, not people who are partying. 5 Same as above, the images are not appropriate. New Idea on landing-page-concept.jpg 1 You can perhaps gather all that is social networks. The fans of facebook / twitter comments in the same area. Because of the sudden, you have the video, you twitter comments and registration. Below, you facebook fans. I think it's not very hierarchical. 2 Recent work is as a news or actuality. I think you can put this window to the left, and newsletter registration to the right Summary:
Hi Saqib,
I hope I understood the purpose of this page and I would not be irrelevant. You want to propose a page with all the modules may require a person who wants to sell products or services. See my notes, I think it's good presentation, but not necessarily well organized, some elements do not mix, even if it's a choice you propose future users. You should standardize your illustrations : have a drawing manga in the slider, pictures of people partying in the middle, and bottom pictures of nature do not give me a good feeling. Even if you want to touch many people, use a more neutral picture! If it's possible! Hoping this helps,
Minor Problem on landing-page-concept.jpg 1 The texture used here does not seem to fit into the overall design, perhaps try adding the same texture to other header elements such as the package label background below? 2 As with the other headings, these do not stand out from other design elements, consider adding color? 3 As with the other button, the gradient seems too strong. Although the contrast is better here. 4 Consider continuing with your use of icons for elements by adding a descriptive icon to this section (speech bubble?) 5 Again, consider adding icons for consistency, a large facebook icon would do well here. 6 Again, consider adding icon? Serious Problem Lacks color, looks a bit bland
Although the layout is very clean and well spaced, I feel that it is lacking color, have you tryed adding another color to the scheme?Serious Problem on landing-page-concept.jpg 1 This header lacks emphasis, it is the first thing that I look at but it does not encourage me to read it. 2 This text may be too small to encourage your audience to read it. Im assuming it is an important statement? consider increasing the font size and shortening the paragraph. 3 These buttons do not seem to fit into the overall cleaner design elements, the gradient is too strong and the contrast is low. Consider a flatter gradient and a lighter font color, or gradient color for better contrast. 4 Phone number is quite small, could be larger for a more effective CTA Summary:
This is a nice clean design, but it feels too dull, needs more color.
Serious Problem on landing-page-concept.jpg 1 Add something that suggests that this is the "Best Seller" or "Recommended". Critical Problem on landing-page-concept.jpg 1 Eliminate scrolling by adding a tab for "Pricing", "Product View" and "What People are Saying" 2 Eliminate 50% or more of the potential content in this block. Ensure that content is scan-able - try to use use bullets. Summary:
Saqib,
Overall this is a clean and functional design template. Your opportunities to make better are related to the following:
- Landing pages should not scroll too deep http://www.formstack.com/the-anatomy-of-a-perfect-landing-page
- Go beyond 'social proof' to illustrate trust markers for visitors. Include industry related markers and awards to help establish credibility with the target audience http://unbounce.com/101-landing-page-optimization-tips/#trust
- Keep reading to a minimum: Ensure visitors get a chance to read your most important copy right off the bat. If it’s buried amongst 5 paragraphs of text, itʼll be missed.
- Follow Best Practices: http://unbounce.com/landing-page-examples/
Nice start!
MichaelR
Serious Problem on landing-page-concept.jpg 1 you can find premade pricing tables at: http://codecanyon.net/category/css/pricing-tables Summary:
The pricing table is good but I think you should have 4 prices (not 3)!
also you can find more premade CSS pricing grids here: http://codecanyon.net/category/css/pricing-tables
