ZoomConcept Reviews
Summary:
Overall all design is above average and I think with minor improvements it can be a great design.
1st: due to logo and nav on left looks like the header is not balance and right side seems empty in an odd way.
2nd: area below slider looks like a mess to me. i think blog posts or portfolio items below it in columns could be a nice touch.
3rd: spacing between widgets in blog sidebar is not good.
4th: footer elements are not aligned with content columns/elements.
Minor Problem on moha2 homepage.jpg 1 Give equal spacing between all links. As you are using an arrow for drop down it reduces space between two links. For instance, spacing between Home and blog is less than Blog and About text. 2 This looks somewhat out of place in your layout, Give some kind of background as you have given to various headings. 3 I presume this to be your blurb area, make it full width. 4 'Continue reading' link and 'date' both look very similar in size and moreover If you look at the whole post list, the date has darker back than all other elements and it gives undue focus on the date rather than continue reading link which I feel is more important to be highlighted so that user reads the whole post. 5 An Html Theme Positive Feature on moha2 homepage.jpg 1 nice drop shadow effect New Idea on moha2 homepage.jpg 1 im personally not a fan of these sidebars, i dont think people notice them much or use them. i would either maybe take it out and place it above or below the rest of your content Summary:
Landing page looks quite nice. Couple small changes on other:
- I don't like BLOG div styles
- Comments block looks uncompleted
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Pushpander Singh commented:Thanks Mike for giving the suggestion on blog page i will definately look in to this to improve blog page.
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Mike Kulakov commented:Also, please excuse me for my short feedback and "Draft" in title. I'm new in the system and certain things was not clear initially.
I wish you good luck and to see more concepts from you.
Summary:
Hello Pushpander,
In the description you highlight "unique" but I'm afraid this layout does not have anything unique, it looks like any other template you can grab online. It's indeed pretty clean and nice but it does not have any WOW factor that deilghted me. The structure is pretty common aswell.
Please refer to this great web designers blog I usually visit to get inspired: http://www.webdesignerdepot.com/2011/10/asymmetrical-balance-in-web-design/
You can find pretty cool stuff there that I'm sure you will get creative enough to pimp your layout.
Looking forward to see next approach. Good designing!
New Idea Share
I know it's a plug in thing, but sharing easily will really grease the wheels of getting the website out there. I'd even go as far as to put the share ability as a scrollable feature. http://www.bkmacdaddy.com/uninspired-demotivated-creative-block-maybe-you-are-In-the-wrong-businessNew Idea on moha2 homepage.jpg 1 I think that a cool avatar person or a character of some sort would scream gamer and that's what will draw us in.... I'm a huge gamer! 2 If you want your portfolio to be a main attraction, then put it next to home, or your home page. I like the menu items to go in order of value to the visitor. If the blog is more important then try Home Blog Portfolio About Contact Summary:
You've got a great start! Dig the color scheme, simplistic yet tangible design, and it looks pretty well thought out.
Minor Problem on moha2 homepage.jpg 1 Maybe here's reason to place meta in the top of the layout? 2 I don't think that using this kind of images is suitable for this design. Recommend leave only titles. Summary:
Great start, but there are a lot of bugs:
- The grey color of your stickers doesn't fit to the design itself.
- I don't like the shadows in the widgets. They looks poor.
- Using white space on the main content is not great. Leave more space between elements!
- Social block between main content and footer must have some space or to be transparent.
- Footer widgets titles is better to align left.
On the whole, the design may be unique, but there a lot of places where you need to make significant improvements!
