ZoomConcept Reviews
Summary:
The site looks clean and appears to meet your objectives. One comment is that it might be beneficial to have some graphics that would make the site more inviting. Maybe a good stock photo of two people talking to each other, or a photo of a famous landmark in Bulgaria. For example, go look at bulgariatravel.org. You might benefit from creating some excitement, some yearning to learn this language.
Minor Problem on quickstartbulgarian.png 1 align this text in the center 2 this white space is not good 3 more spaces here 4 Don't crop your capture Serious Problem on quickstartbulgarian.png 1 Align your menu to the right 2 More spaces here 3 Why these sub titles are in black ? You need to define the style of your title/sub-title1/sub-title2 for all your website. it helps the user understand the organization 4 This title should not be larger than the main title of the section 5 Same remark as such should not be larger than the main title. It must have the same style as the title "a lesson ...." of the section above New Idea on quickstartbulgarian.png 1 You can have a button to return to the top of the site 2 All these titles could be larger, and with another color in order to clarify the elements hierarchy Summary:
Hello Michel, I give you my opinion on the layout of your site, what affects the design. The problem is the hierarchy of the various elements of your site. Alignments, spacing, titles are not well organized, and that makes reading difficult.
As you have a lot of information on this home page, the organization must be clear and I think it is enough to hold the titles and subtitles as I suggested in the notes, aerate the text, maybe add separation between zones. In particular, you have a sub-menu that explains the lessons, and the user must understand that this affects only the "what do the quickstart ...".
Hoping this helps
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Michel Rossier commented:Hi Mlm Marie, thank you very much for your detailed feedback. That helps me a lot!
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Minor Problem It seems too cluttered below the fold.
As soon as I saw the top section I knew what the website is trying to tell me, but as I scrolling down, I started getting confused. There's too much information.Positive Feature Love everything above the fold
I like the color and the design of the video section and the special offer section (special offer section can be more visually attractive)Call to action
If i was to learn bulgarian today, I think I would be interested. Given that the price is shown on the website and the special offer.New Idea Lessons in separate tab
I think the details of the lessons should be placed at a separate tab.Summary:
I like the overall design of the site. It's clean. There's too much information on the homepage below the fold. Should consider putting them in separate tabs.
Minor Problem on quickstartbulgarian.png 1 Gradient doesn't work Serious Problem on quickstartbulgarian.png 1 Too far down on the page for a call to action button Critical Problem on quickstartbulgarian.png 1 crowed - somewhat distracting layout. 960 grid would help Summary:
Nice start - but needs a better organization. Consider using the following:
I hope this works...
MichaelR
Summary:
I agree with comments already made. It communicates effectively what the website does. Below the fold it gets a little unstructured.
I think what is really missing is proof points. What tells me that your method works? Are there testimonials? What is your method? Why does it work? Is there any proof? Is there some authority validating this?
Also, is this going to be fun? Learning a language seems hard. What do the learning materials look like?
Hope that helps.
Minor Problem Logo
Logo isn't standing out as it should be. Standing out I mean not fancy - but unique.Application Screenshot
Not sure if you need this screenshot here. Looks a bit out of place.Positive Feature Top Navigation
Navigation at the top is simple and clear. (Matches the latest design trend)New Idea Please add testimonials
People look for testimonials and it can easily build the trust with your audience.Summary:
The main visual & the layout looks good.
There is a lot of text in the below the main visual. You may need to create a balance with using images, and less text.
Minor Problem on quickstartbulgarian.png 1 Ensure bottom and top spaces are both same, there is more space at bottom then at top. 2 Give more space between your shadow divider and block below. 3 Make this an attractive button or give a nice background so that it stands out. 4 Margin below 'FAQ' section on left is less as compared to the margin or space below 'what do the....' section on right. Ensure at least first row on both sides are aligned at same level. New Idea on quickstartbulgarian.png 1 I would suggest you to make it colored with a complimentary color like orange, blue or somewhat darker than green used, so that it stands out as this is a signup button.
