| Minor Problem | |
| Remove the circle. Maybe another gradient | |
| Minor Problem on Grid Cover | |
| 1 | Maybe you should remove the gradient |
| Positive Feature on Brown Coffee | |
| 1 | I like this version most |
It does come across friendly, but I don't really understand the connection to the cup of coffee. Perhaps unlocking using a lock would be a better idea.
Thanks! The goal for coffee was to have something warm & approachable (not a calculator, etc.) but I think the metaphor needs some massaging. Appreciate the feedback!
| Minor Problem on Grid Cover | |
| 1 | I think it may have been mentioned, but I would put this all in lowercase. Also, I like the pi symbol. Use it. |
| 2 | What is this? What does it signify? It's unclear. |
You have an elegant cover but it needs more focus. I'm not sure what the cappuccino is supposed to signify. But MATH doesn't come up.
I'd sure stay away from the pi symbol as the letter "p" - hard to read and seems awkward. My favorite is #4 - however "Math better explained" seems a little difficult in its wording. Maybe "Math - easily explained" or "Math explained better".
Your value prop looks lost as a footer - might make it more prominent. Would also try different graphic omages besides a coffee cup or a ball of fire (?) - the connection isn't there to reinforce your concept.
Thanks for the review! I think the pi is confusing as well.
"Better Explained" is the brand (unfortunately it doesn't read as well when combined with the title) but I think it can work with a comma: "Math, Better Explained"
I'll have to give more thought to the images too. Appreciate it!
I understand the cast-in-stone brand name, but if you can tweak it to add the comma ("Math, Better Explained"), that is the perfect solution!
I like this one the most, the second and the third one are also not bad, but this is the only, that is not whole covered in black a that makes it look more friendly instead of a little bit scary :) however I'm not really sure about the image, why did you choose a cup of coffee? I like the image, but I don't really know how did you mean it when connected to math... :)
I like the third design but the I confused with the pie. My first impression is that I read it as 'r'.
| Positive Feature | |
| Need some more color combination on page. | |
Thanks for the feedback!