ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem Remove the circle. Maybe another gradient Minor Problem on Grid Cover 1 Maybe you should remove the gradient Positive Feature on Brown Coffee 1 I like this version most Summary:
It does come across friendly, but I don't really understand the connection to the cup of coffee. Perhaps unlocking using a lock would be a better idea.
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Kalid Azad commented:Thanks! The goal for coffee was to have something warm & approachable (not a calculator, etc.) but I think the metaphor needs some massaging. Appreciate the feedback!
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Minor Problem on Grid Cover 1 I think it may have been mentioned, but I would put this all in lowercase. Also, I like the pi symbol. Use it. 2 What is this? What does it signify? It's unclear. Summary:
You have an elegant cover but it needs more focus. I'm not sure what the cappuccino is supposed to signify. But MATH doesn't come up.
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I'd sure stay away from the pi symbol as the letter "p" - hard to read and seems awkward. My favorite is #4 - however "Math better explained" seems a little difficult in its wording. Maybe "Math - easily explained" or "Math explained better".
Your value prop looks lost as a footer - might make it more prominent. Would also try different graphic omages besides a coffee cup or a ball of fire (?) - the connection isn't there to reinforce your concept.
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Kalid Azad commented:
Thanks for the review! I think the pi is confusing as well.
"Better Explained" is the brand (unfortunately it doesn't read as well when combined with the title) but I think it can work with a comma: "Math, Better Explained"
I'll have to give more thought to the images too. Appreciate it!
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Gary Myers commented:I understand the cast-in-stone brand name, but if you can tweak it to add the comma ("Math, Better Explained"), that is the perfect solution!
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Summary:
I like this one the most, the second and the third one are also not bad, but this is the only, that is not whole covered in black a that makes it look more friendly instead of a little bit scary :) however I'm not really sure about the image, why did you choose a cup of coffee? I like the image, but I don't really know how did you mean it when connected to math... :)
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I like the third design but the I confused with the pie. My first impression is that I read it as 'r'.
Positive Feature Need some more color combination on page.
Thanks for the feedback!