Just got an e-mail from you asking me to review your site. Had a quick look to see you've given something like 10 one line reviews.
I refer you to this brilliant post by Serena - couldn't put it better myself but it might start you off on a better foot.
I won't be reviewing your work as you are not contributing anything to the community.
I do like the site, but it also seems very busy and there is so much to look at, I don't know what to look at first if that makes sense?
There is also alot of different colours which is fantastic for kids, but maybe if its an adult buying it might be difficult?
I did like the nice streamlined shopping cart, very fancy!
Good idea but I think you need to redesign thoes banner buttons (use rounded rectangle tool maybe) and blue is a good color for them (match with the menu bar). I don't think you need to use transparent button (coz no transparent items in your layout)
I hope it's helpful,
Junoteam.
This comp is alright, but it seems to be fairly typical. The colors and icons are fun, which is nice for the theme. Unfortunately it might be a little too much. Try sticking to 3 colors max, or at least more complimentary colors.
I'm not a fan of the latest arrivals and featured deals in that sort of format. Maybe only show 3 of each? No sidebar?
First cry?, c'mon! you can do better than that.
Thanks for your review can you suggest more please.
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Space problem in the header.Seems there is too much space in the header to the right of the logo. I would suggest putting the search and the buttons on the same row to fill that space. | |
verticle center of text in the blue bar.Some of the text (i.e. single words) are not centered vertically. Might be a good idea to center them.
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| Positive Feature | |
Good use of colors.I like the colors, they match the target audience. | |
Overall, it seems like a typical online store. A little bit busy and besides the problems outlined I dont really see major concerns.
keep up the good work.
| Minor Problem | |
Too similar to other websiteI like the design of your website. But I feel that it wont stand out from the competition, especially if you are a new company entering such a competitive marketplace.
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| New Idea | |
Look at other competitorsAnalyse your competitors and see what you could do better. I feel as though web design has evolved a lot recently and I dont think you are taking advantage of this. Keep it simple and clean | |
| Positive Feature | |
home pagehome page should be attractive... | |
Totally agree, I also won't be reviewing your stuff, unless you review others properly!