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Simple clean design.I like where you are going with this. It is simple which is exactly what a mobile user needs. | |
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Maybe have a box with images of different headlines. A good example of this is http://www.ted.com/
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I think you should change the color of paragraph text. There are no good contrast there.
now that you have mentioned this, i have to agree, thanks ;)
It's clean and simple which I like. I'm assuming it's an RSS feed type blog app? Are the headline clickable and is there a link to read "more" or is this it? It needs an overall headline IMO.
whole div will be clickable ;)
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| 1 | this font may be readable on i pad, but that would be it., ok, may be on ipod, if you lucky. Bigger font, more contract! |
| 2 | consider showing date in a different format. |
| 3 | again, on a mobile device you need to utilize all the space that is giving to you, utilizing space on the sides you will be able to make larger text font to enhance readability. |
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| 1 | may be add a little bit of shadow under the white starts |
Hi, Jan, dont get me wrong , its a good clean layout, i like the colors and fonts, but have you actually check it out on a mobile device? see my notes on a side;
you're right ;) in v2 i've made it all bigger and slightly resized top and bottom navigation bar also i've added small shadow under the stars... let me know what do you think ;)
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Text way too smallThat is a gigantic iPhone... try shrinking it down to life-size and the font will get tiny (especially the "top rated" and "december" which is barely visible now). A real phone will be 40% this size, so larger font & darker text will be necessary. | |
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Nice clean layoutI like the font choice and spacing between image and words. | |
Use full widthOn phones, screen real estate is at a premium so make sure there is enough information density. Too much margin on the sides will cut into the actual amount of info you can display. | |
That's true :D and thanks ;)
Glad it was helpful!
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| 1 | Text may be to small to catch the readers attention for each article. My want to increase text size and give it more contrast. |
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| 1 | Looks like Microsofts font on the Zune and Window mobile devices! lol |
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CleanReally like the clean design of the app. Crisp and clear, unique from other mobile blog web apps. | |
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| 1 | Very nicely done! |
Overall I think it is a great design though the design may effect the usability on some level. I believe these issues are all things that can be improved without a big cost to the design.
thanks ;) have to change that ;)
Love the look, feel, font, font color, colors & white space! Question: Where will the logo of the site appear? Also would be good if u have an arrow indicating there are other menus when clicked on the Articles button/bar. Also the bottom in between the arrows feels empty, may be add a copyright and website info.
that's what am i trying to do, good to know it works ;), thanks