ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem Font sizes
I'm not sure how easily readable these fonts will be on a real phone -- shrink the images down to an actual size and see. Also, the contrast may not be enough, take the text down to #333 or #555 if you want grey, but #aaa or similar may be too bright.What are the boxes at the bottom?
Are they swipe to go to the next page? If so, they will be tiny when reduced to phone size. Not obvious what they are.Positive Feature Nice use of whitespace
The text definitely has some good breathing room.Color scheme is nice
Clean, I like a little texturing on the background.New Idea What is the forward arrow?
If it's for next page, it should be near the boxes showing your current page.Minor Problem Character Space
The character space seems be tight making it less readable. You may want to increase this a bit to make easy for the readers eyes.Positive Feature Layout and font selection
Your logo and font selection looks great.Font colors
Font colors look dull and you may want to use a darker version of the grey colorSummary:
Looks cool.
Not sure if you really need a search for your mobile website.
Use of image makes it look interesting.
I see that you are using arrows for navigating to the next page - but I am confused with the use of the apples default navigation style in the bottom of the page. Something to look at.
Good start!
Serious Problem on 2.jpg 1 I like this (assuming it's the 'read more' or 'load more stories' link). I feel it's more logical to place it at the bottom of the document though: closer to the thumbnail bullets- maybe even incorporate both nav elements into a single interface? Positive Feature Few Minor Tweaks
Fantastic start. I have very little for you: check the notes for details. Niiice work.Positive Feature on 2.jpg 1 Higher contrast and (maybe) font size here would ramp up readablilty immensely. New Idea on 2.jpg 1 This would be virtually undetectable in a moderately well-lit environment. Maybe change the border and magnifying glass to the same color as the background to the header. And the placeholder text to that of the word 'theme' in the header?
