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| 1 | It doesn't have that special thing. It looks way too plain. Do you want to create a minimalist style or what are you going to do? |
I personally don't like typography. You have to find a good combination.
The design itself is not that bad but it doesn't look got at all because of that issue - typography.
Also please write some text in English. If you can't compose then find some text to put in there. Lorem Ipsum doesn't look good.
After you choose a happy font combination, please re-upload it.
All the best, Ciprian
Hi John, this might be helpful: http://www.instantshift.com/2011/10/14/a-short-introduction-into-typography/
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HierarchyI don't think the logo stands out as much as it should. It should be a focal point right when going to the site. Perhaps you can put it all the way at the top left. | |
Overall, nice clean and slick design. I do like the minimalistic approach so the visitor does not get overwhelmed with content.
The visual hierarchy is wrong, the design is too simple, the negative space usage is wrong, the fonts are terrible, it lacks social tools, the rich content footer is missing, the logo is terrible, the search looks really bad, the slider buttons don't look good, but besides that it looks great :) , i suggest you learn the principles of web design and good luck with your project.
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Site PurposeThe design and layout are great. A very well designed store. Its may help and little to give a little more clarity to the main purpose of the website, so its more obvious what its for. That said, once some is on the site, they will probably know what its purposes before they land. | |
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Thank you! I will do that