ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on leopardnailsdraft.png 1 Different font (try the one from the slider) Serious Problem on leopardnailsdraft.png 1 Put the main navigation here. Critical Problem on leopardnailsdraft.png 1 The logo is not ok, try something else. 2 The pattern is very distracting. Summary:
Hi Peter, interesting approach. I,m curious to see how you will integrate the menu but if you leave it like it is now is not ok, here are some ideas for the navigation http://designcirc.us/themes/?theme=Bookcase(Portfolio) http://themeforest.net/item/vcard-advanced-modern-vcard-theme/fullscreenpreview/648693 http://themeforest.net/item/digital-vcardportfolio-template/fullscreenpreview/633406 Please see my comments.
Minor Problem Background image
I would tone down your background image just a bit. The contrast in the leopard spots directs my attention away from the content.font choices
The font used for the content is fine, but I would consider changing the yellow fancy script. I find it hard to read and the color does not go well with the rest of the page. Also I would use the regular font (or something simpler) for your email and phone at the topSerious Problem Navigation
It took me some time to realize your navigation is on the bottom of the screen. I would definitely bring this up to the top. If I can't find my way around your site, I can't buy anything.Minor Problem on leopardnailsdraft.png 1 Logo is hard to read with that color on gray Minor Problem on leopardnailsdraft.png 1 These blocks look rather boring in terms of color and style. Your background and logo give off a certain feel. However, your boxes do not match that, they look as if they are just a template item. Serious Problem on leopardnailsdraft.png 1 This icon should be understood by the user as a signal that the following line is an email address. Currently, it does not do that. Positive Feature on leopardnailsdraft.png 1 Your background is distracting, it takes away from the other elements on the page. Try making it more sudle. Perhaps making it a bit lighter. Summary:
I think you have a good concept, however, I believe you have some work to do with your execution.
Critical Problem Background
I think the background is too 1993. Find a higher quality pattern.Product
May not be the best way to showcase the products.Summary:
hello there, honestly I can't see design here, colorr palette, logo, background, ec. i would suggest to get some inspiration browsing internet, then start over again
Critical Problem Heading Font & Rose
I don't like the font as it's too hard to read and isn't easy on the eye.. the colour is fine. Change it to something stronger or less whispy... rose doesn't really fit, for me, with the background and it's kinda just floating there.Without being able to "test" the site it's a little hard to determine how easy it is to use sorry. Positive Feature Animal Print Background
It's really bold and alive. Adds a "sexy" feel to the page.Summary:
try another color for the logo to make it emphasize.... or you can change your theme since the your target are women. Be more feminine to your design.
