ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on ScreenShot014.jpg 1 This sub menu is somewhat unexpected, I wasn't sure what was going on for a second or two until I figured it out. Minor Problem on ScreenShot011.jpg 1 The heading text inside the boxes when selected is weak, I would suggest making the text a different font, or more powerful in some way. Critical Problem on ScreenShot012.jpg 1 I am not sure what the point of this page is. It seems like the homepage should be what's behind the "learn more link". Also, when the home link is clicked, it takes you back here; which is somewhat unexpected. Positive Feature on ScreenShot013.jpg 1 Nice use of color to attract users to donate. 2 I like the color scheme and the way it is implemented. Positive Feature on ScreenShot014.jpg 1 Like the use of icons to illustrate the sections. Summary:
Good design and color scheme. Needs some work with the font, navigation, and the goal of the "splash page".
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You asked for usability suggestions, so here you go:
The Facebook box is in a very awkward part of the screen. I would reduce the size, get rid of the status updates and move it to the sidebar.
At the same time, I think the sidebar is a little bit too busy. Get rid of some of the stuff there.
- The titles of the navigation are confusing. I would change them to something clearer. I would also make it clear that there are things under the menu to pick from.
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Hi Ming, the home page looks really good, just a few things i don't like. First, i think you should make the "Donate Now" button stand out more. Second, make "For All The World To See" font like the h2 from the slider (SEE, HOW, etc), i think is the BEBAS font (it will make it stand out more). Third, align "For All The World To See", and the buttons to the right. These are the easy changes but i think the main problem is that when i leave the slider page and go to "Lean More" or "Donate Now" it seams that i'm going to another website because the other pages are so different and i mean Style, Fonts, etc. At least make the "Donate Now" button from home page orange like in the other pages. Good luck with your project.
Minor Problem on ScreenShot013.jpg 1 I think the image of the woman with the baby with the 'see' heading is too dominant, and steals focus from the mission statement. I didn't read it until I had scanned over the other the elements of the page first. 2 I would prefer the main navigation titles to be more specific - I understand that it follows how/what/why questions, but I wasn't interested enough to want to click on any of these. Positive Feature on ScreenShot012.jpg 1 I think this caption is really powerful - I went to click the play button, even though it's a static visual! Positive Feature on ScreenShot014.jpg 1 The images of the people made me care about those who need the treatment. Summary:
I would like to see some more exotic typefaces and graphical treatments, to make me think about the countries that the people in the photos of this website are from.
Some statistics or infographics would communicate the organisation's proposition quickly and effectively. I assume that these are contained in the video - but it would be very useful to have these within the main website, too.
