| Minor Problem on index.jpg | |
| 1 | margin-bottom of this block is too small compared to margin-top imo |
| 2 | To me, the picture-width would be ideally suited to use as the width of the text-blocks below. Without doing this, it looks a bit cluttered. |
| 3 | margin-bottom should be at least margin-top. I'd make it more though. |
| Serious Problem on index.jpg | |
| 1 | alignments looks awkward. I'd arrange the 3 blocks so that left-alignment and right-alignment of text match up with alignment of text in main panel |
| New Idea on index.jpg | |
| 1 | Not to sure about your serif typeface. It doesn't look modern to me. A nice 'semi-serif' and still modern looking font that might work is Museo. |
Overall looks pretty nice. I like the ribbon-like main-menu it nicely breaks the grid.
Some minor notes on margin / whitespace + suggestion on header font
| Minor Problem | |
PageThe triangle indicator that changes per page should be a little bigger so there is no question which page the visitor is on. It's best to be able to tell just by looking at a glance. | |
| Positive Feature | |
Beautiful, Simple, EffectiveI love this template. I could use it for one of my clients I have right now actually. Good typography, colors, module placements. You obviously know how to design with CSS. | |
| New Idea | |
MobileIt's a big plus to have a template ready for iPhone and Android. Just a thought. | |
You have a solid knowledge of what it takes to compete in the vast array of CMS designers. Keep it up and keep challenging yourself to be unique.
Thx, For nice comment. I want to sell it as WP template on ThemeForest but, i dont have reaction from them for now.
| Minor Problem on index.jpg | |
| 1 | It looks like this theme is tailored to a person that designs / makes things. Perhaps your text, or at least headers, should have statements typical to portfolio sites. Such as, " We are BLANK, a web development company". That sort of thing. |
| Positive Feature on index.jpg | |
| 1 | Really enjoy the navigation you have, really stands out from a lot of other sites. |
| 2 | Like the typography; am a fan of mixing serif and sans serif fonts such as your header and body text. |
| 3 | Like your lighting effect to showcase the core of the footer. |
| 4 | Like the graphical elements. |
Love the design, the colors, and the typography. Perhaps you want to change your header text at the top of the page to reflect the type of site it is vs lorum ipsum text.
Thx for nice comment. Only I not 100% sure what you mean in the 1st point. Can you please more explain?
I mean that you might want to put relevant text in your header section.
This looks as any website should look like. Very clean and intuitive. Not sure if I'm too much into those pink links but other than that well done and all the best selling it.
Thx. Link are red, not pink. When you open http://bit.ly/beringer you will see.
Yeah sorry about it, they look pink here :)