ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem on 01_home.jpg 1 make a real logo, it will look better Serious Problem on 01_home.jpg 1 try keeping the space between the elements equal in all the website on horizontal and vertical (now it's chaos) 2 make the links more visible (change color) 3 make the links more visible 4 chaos again, here are some great footer examples http://themeforest.unitedthemes.com/?theme=strangewp http://demo.truethemes.net/Karma-Wordpress/ http://themes.mdnw.net/?theme=SuperSkeletonWP http://themeforest.net/item/striking-premium-corporate-portfolio-wp-theme/full_screen_preview/128763 Critical Problem on 01_home.jpg 1 the elements in the website are not aligned, i suggest that you use a grid sistem like http://960.gs 2 more space between the frame and the elements inside (horizontal and vertical) 3 use a pricing table, here are some examples of great pricing tables (get inspired but don't copy!) http://www.1stwebdesigner.com/inspiration/fantastic-pricing-tables-inspiration/ , http://abduzeedo.com/web-design-pricing-tables , http://ui-patterns.com/explore/collections/pricing-tables Summary:
Hi Sotir, your first website needs a lot of work, but i have confidence that the finished product will be great, my comments are only for the design but your biggest problem is the consistency, for example i have no idea about the porpoise of the website
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Minor Problem Plans summary is too big
There's too much info there for a landing page. Better create a designated 'Pricing' or 'Plans' pageCritical Problem Too much text
And nothing really stands out. You have to hierachize the info, then keep only the first 3 items.Positive Feature Good organization
I like the separation in horizontal slicesNew Idea Bigger photo size
You have to decide if the priority is in the 'Last News' text or the left image. If I were you, I'd put the image as a background for that section on the entire width. Then put a short text on top of it, eventually-
David Laurentiu commented:i agree
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you have contributed next to nothing on CF and yet you post a concept expecting quality reviews. "you gotta give to get"...
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Sotir Nikolov commented:Thank you remind me.
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Minor Problem on 01_home.jpg 1 Allow more px space 2 Allow more px space 3 For the main piece of type try to avoid the use of hyphens and widows Serious Problem on 01_home.jpg 1 Need to stand out more 2 See my summary... Hierarchy is key here 3 For the headings for all the other sections you have used a specific typeface, but for this a different one. Keep consistency 4 Make it stand out more Critical Problem on 01_home.jpg 1 For me this shouldn't be on the homepage. The homepage should inform the user what the site is about and make them want to carry on through the site. Them seeing price plans straight aways, for me, isn't a good strategy. A comment above linked a few examples of pricing plans that you could implement on a different page Positive Feature on 01_home.jpg 1 This is a nice choice of blue Other grid!
Use a grid! a good one to get used to is the 960 gridSummary:
I would say that the main problem here is hierarchy. What is the most important element? and the least important? A comment made above about the use of a whole image with text sitting on it sounds like a great one, as having the same px width for image and Last news is confusing the user.
I have made notes on errors that I have seen, mostly from a design POV (I am also quite new to web design), but keep going and it will soon come together
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Sotir Nikolov commented:
to right, this I decided to share it with others, yet when we do something at first sight for us may be great but at the same time is full of errors. Thanks so much for the advice.
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Minor Problem on 01_home.jpg 1 This wide spacing seems awkward, you should increase the size of the elements in this section. Those containers will also benefit from the longer lines of text (lines of 6-8 words are pretty comfortable to read) Serious Problem on 01_home.jpg 1 At this part I would most likely stop reading, it is a lot of information that is presented without a discernible way to to process it. Use alignment, size and color to help visitors figure out which plan most benefits them. Don't be afraid to call out a plan that has better potential to suit a user's needs, people's eyes will be attracted to the callout and it will at least give them somewhere to start. 2 Although it helps balance your page from afar, aligning the text to the right makes it harder to read. And the harder it is to read... well, the just won't read it. 3 This header seems to be floating awkwardly, and reads nearly at the same level as the rest of the text. New Idea on 01_home.jpg 1 Since each section of this area starts with about, maybe have the color change be the rest of the sentence so visitors can easily figure out what that section is about. 2 Keep with the style of the Read More link in the about section, or if your set on a particular style, make it universal for all the learn more links
To right, I totally agree, thank you very much!