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Minor Problem on http://mirakkulglassware.com 1 background is too cheap Critical Problem on http://mirakkulglassware.com 1 images texts and buttons aren't aligned 2 margins should be the same everywhere 3 the menu seems sketchy work more on it 4 looks like it shouldn't be here 5 why don't you put it on the left of the main menu or on the right 6 it's invisible on this backgroud Critical Problem on http://mirakkulglassware.com/index.php?main_page=product_info&cPath=25&products_id=248 1 add space New Idea on http://mirakkulglassware.com/index.php?main_page=index&cPath=25 1 add more line-height and maybe I would try another font that matches better with the rest Summary:
I think that what you wanted to achieve was a clean and rational design, but the overall impression is that everything is too poor. You should work more on details, the setting start is good but lacks that little bit more to reach your goals.
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Minor Problem on http://mirakkulglassware.com 1 Low contrast Serious Problem on http://mirakkulglassware.com 1 This section will need improvements in spacing Summary:
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Tim Sullivan commented:Welcome to Concept Feedback. Here are some guidelines to help you get started:
CF is a mutual support community. Its purpose is to provide designers a forum through which we can give each other high quality feedback in order to receive the same in return. CF welcomes new members, and both invites and expects them to write constructive reviews. This is the same expectation that is made of all members.
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Hey thanks for all the ideas! Do you have any suggestions on what kind of background color/design would be nice?