Jamal
I am somewhat surprised to see this, I have seen what you can do and to be honest this isn't your best work… In fact I would have to say it's fairly amateurish.
Hopefully, you will not take theses crits to heart and will be ok with my lack of subtly, but basically the font is yuck, it's not lined to a base, and the eyes (I assume that's wat they are) look like a bad afterthought…
Based on what this is supposed to achieve I would suggest a logo to start from scratch, try bello pro or something from this site: http://www.losttype.com/
Good Luck!
Oh, I don't. This was a random idea that came into my head and its just one of those ones where its hard to get out. I'm still sketching it out when I get time and playing with the look.
Thanks for the honesty, :)