ZoomConcept Reviews
Minor Problem Too light
The serach box is too ligth you might make the color darker , it seems like there is a transparent white layer over it, same for the login form and the iconsPositive Feature on 메인_new_B_01.png 1 I love it !!!! Clean and simple, the colored dog-ears are very nice as well , good job New Idea The menu doesn't look like a menu
While you are using unconventional text in the menu, menu items should look more like links-
Patrick Kim commented:thanks. that's really helpful. never crossed my mind before you mentioned it.
New Idea on 메인_new_B_01.png 1 What if you move the search box to right side of the menu bar and move the menu items to the left. The logo should move to the left as well while the left part will be empty -
Patrick Kim commented:
Could be good to have the search box always accessible at the top, even while scrolling through. Will give that a try, although I'm concerned it might end up looking similar to option 2.
Summary:
I like the first design it is clean and simple, but the gray you are using are too light especially in the top of the page. I didn't review the other images because the first one is my favorit :)
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Critical Problem Header White Space
Too much of header space is wasted unnecessarily. I belief if you mange this area properly you can move you design around 80-100 pixel up. User don't have to scroll much to see the scraps.search and login is almost lost in the white space
The search and login is too faded out. It almost lost in white.Logo should be bigger
You have very pretty logo, it should be bigger in size.No registration link
register link is missing!Positive Feature Footer part
Footer can have some dark back ground color.New Idea Reduce the header space
Few ways for it. - move the logo to the left, and make it bigger. - Navigation can be next to the logo as you have only 3 tabs in the navigation - login can be just a link, when it clicked a drop down is come up where user can fill the information. - new, popular, video and category can be a drop down.-
Patrick Kim commented:
thanks for the insightful comments. do you feel like option 2 is closer to what you are recommending? or is there something missing from option 2?
logo's heart and its circle.
Logo and its circle should be used some where/ some how in the design.Summary:
Over all its a good clean design just needs few tweaks.
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Minor Problem on 메인_new_B_01.png 1 this could use a bit more emphasis. I didn't notice them at first glance (which is perhaps what you want) Positive Feature on 메인_new_B_01.png 1 Really nice. Tight margins between tiles work here. New Idea on 메인_new_B_01.png 1 I take it these 'color-coding' relate to certain product-categories? It would be great if you could filter on these categories as well (and use the color-coding for that navigational element) Just a thought. Summary:
NOTE: the notes show the wrong icons again. I added Positive features and one small problem :)
I like the concept of the tiled product-teasers of different sizes. It invites exploring the site. Also love the overall look & feel. Very clean and very inviting.
You mention you want people to log-in / sign-up, but to me the call-to-action for that is not really clear. How about making the sign-up -form one of the tiles as well and scatter it between the products (in addition to what you already have at the top)?
As mentioned, I really love the tiling. Perhaps even nicer would be to establish a couple of fixed sizes for the tiles (with some careful calculation) so when you stack them you will always establish a particular vertical rhytm (i.e: horziontal gutters aligned properly, etc. ) This might add an extra dimension to the whole.
Have a look at Ted.com for what I'm talking about. There the horizontal gutters are always aligned.
BTW: I'm not sure if this is of any help, but there's a jquery-plugin that automatically arranges a page given a set of tiles. It may come in useful to be able to tell your client. Jquery Masonry
Great job!
Summary:
I like the first concept the best, except I would suggest to move your logo to where the search box is since the eyes flow from left to right.
I would also make your sub menu (i luuv, we luuv...etc) a bit bigger or with a different colour so they pop.
I love the simplicity of the visual presentation. I also love the idea to collect and share what your friends are buying! It's a great way to create communities among online shoppers.
Minor Problem on 메인_new_B_01.png 1 The content part is very nice. i love it. great work Critical Problem on 메인_new_B_01.png 1 I cannot suggest placing the logo at the center because most people may not love it. Left or right end is my suggestion. 2 the header looking like that have no relation to the content(grey) part. I suggest you to make the header background to grey as well. Summary:
Design is nice, i love light look color on web page.
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Summary:
Really nice UI experience in relation to the products, only suggestion would be to maybe the site navigation a little easier for folks that aren't very design savvy and just want to navigat around the site as quickly as possible. Perhaps a nav bar?
Minor Problem on 메인_new_B_01.png 1 Low contrast New Idea on 메인_new_B_01.png 1 Maybe move social icons to footer Positive Feature I really like the 3rd iteration
Everything is very simple and niceSummary:
I like the 2nd design, I love how you divide the content and the large visuals to tingle the eye. I am wondering tho if the color triangles on the corner has any use?
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Patrick Kim commented:
yes. they are markers for different product categories.
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yes. I agree I need to highlight the log-in more.