ZoomConcept Reviews
Summary:
A comic about a monkey in love would be AWESOME. Is he a monkey?
IF he (or she?) is a monkey remember they do not have protruding noses so the profile might look like this:
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Minor Problem on Comic-Chracter.jpg 1 I like the facial expressions :) 2 It's leaning forward and walking like zombies.. Positive Feature on Comic-Chracter.jpg 1 I like the idea of single teeth... making foolishness pretty obvious. Other on Comic-Chracter.jpg 1 I assume you will working on the detailing part so no comment here. Summary:
Hi Haider,
Hahaha LOL...This Monkey does look absolute fool to me and I think you are pretty close to see it coming alive.
some of things I added as notes which I think may help you to polish your concept further.
I think I can help you in story boarding, however, I am in between something urgent so will share the same over the email.
Thanks, Warish
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Serina Patterson commented:
ack - the </ul> tag deleted on me. Ah well - I think it's still readable :)
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Tim Sullivan commented:Serina,
I have the original in a TextEdit file. If you send me an email, I will send you the file. Then, when you copy and paste, your comment will be formatted correctly. (If you're not on a Mac, I can send it in a MS Word file.)
If anybody else would like to use this text, let me know and I'll send you the file.
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Positive Feature Sketch
Would have to be honest and say that I don't understand the concept.Summary:
We will need more explanation of where you plan on taking this idea.
Positive Feature nice Summary:
I would make the eyes bigger, to make him feel more human. Right now he feels a bit scary.
Hey Alex... I love your suggestion. This is something I wanted to achieve :)
I like your idea about "A monkey in love" I will work around with it and will share the progress with you. Anything else you have in your mind?
Thanks, Haider