Concept Reviews
Positive Feature I live everything. Nice logo
Nice color combinations, beautiful and simple icon.New Idea CREATIVE text maybe bigger and justified Maybe other font... Positive Feature colors and font works well
Not sure if placing the graphics in the left top corner is a good idea because the logo will take up a lot of space and in effect make the font look comparatively small. (especially "creative" if you place the logo on a business card.) It's kinda funny that the design company will hire someone to do their logo =)Critical Problem Not look like a modern logo
this looks like a old fashion logo. Not look like a modern logoToo much of gray color
Too much of gray color is used. That gives a dull felling.No branding is tryed to done
Logo should always give you a brand value. Which is missing here. Branding can be done with good set of colors. Good set of fonts, or even good let of graphics.New Idea Web 2.0 logo
You should try some thing close to web 2.0 logos.Better use of fonts
Try to use better use of fonts. Which catches your eye. Check out Google logo, Concept feedback logo etc.Summary:
Over all it is a good start. Just try to give it modern look.
Positive Feature i like the font not wild about the graphic Summary:
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Tim Sullivan commented:Welcome to Concept Feedback. Here are some guidelines to help you get started:
CF is a mutual support community. Its purpose is to provide designers a forum through which we can give each other high quality feedback in order to receive the same in return. CF welcomes new members, and both invites and expects them to write substantive reviews. This is the same expectation that is made of all members.
Writing reviews with few or no constructive comments is called an empty review. It is a practice that is discouraged.
If you have not already done so, I suggest you take a few minutes to read some reviews that have been written by established CF members. There are many talented designers here who freely give of themselves by writing reviews that help their fellow CF community members. It is possible to learn a lot by reading their reviews.
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There is no required formula to follow in writing a review. Each of us has his/her own style. However, to help you get started, here are a few questions that you might address in a review:
- What works about the design and why?
- What does not work about the design and why?
- How can the design be improved? Specific, actionable comments are encouraged.
- Does the design effectively communicate its message? If not, why not and how can it be improved?
- Is the design well suited for its target audience?
- Do the design’s colors support its message?
- Is the typography effective and appropriate?
- Is the text legible?
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